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Today salary play important role in our life style.some people's think that big salary is much more important than a job satisfaction. In my point of job satisfication is more crucial in our life because salary is used to pursue our needs .

Today salary play important role in our life style. some people's think that big salary is much more important than a job satisfaction. In my point of job satisfication is more crucial in our life because salary is used to pursue our needs. LbBpR

In addition, if pupils get more salary but they don't like the way of work that people not more excited every day to gone for a job. this work is like a burden our head. otherwise they not fully enjoyed the daily. for example if people more comfortable with their job they provide new ideas to grow up the production work. big salary also provide the big house and other extra necessary equipment. With the more salary they buy luxury car but inner happiness is more important than a fake showoff to other people. Over all, job satisfaction is must for pupils as compare to big salary. Satisfaction provide relaxation, peace mind

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salary
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but
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salary
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big
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house
 and other extra necessary equipment. With the more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salary
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buy
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people
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Over all, job satisfaction is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 for pupils as compare to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
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salary
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