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Today , people can use the internet to learn about the culture and lifestyle of the people of other countries . So, there is no need to travel to other countries to learn their culture. Agree or disagree.

In the modern epoch, learning through internet related the culture and lifestyles of the multitudes of various nations. It is the best way. Despite this, they not need to visit other countries to learn their lifestyle. I am strongly disagree with this statement and I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs. Discussing the first point, the most intrinsic one is that uninterest and monotonous. To justify, if masses not travel the different nations and they get information through internet when they have not internet. For instance, when America, Canada and other countries people travel india then they gain knowledge about indian culture with plethora of curiosity. Like if, they eat greens with maize chapati then they will without a doubt, thanks to the india.
In the modern epoch, learning through internet related the culture and lifestyles of the multitudes of various nations. It is the best way. Despite this, they not need to visit other countries to learn their lifestyle. I am
strongly
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disagree
with this statement and I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

Discussing the
first
point, the most intrinsic one is that
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uninterest
and monotonous. To justify, if masses not travel the
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different
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nations and
they
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get
information through internet when they have not internet.
For instance
, when America, Canada and other countries
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people
travel
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india
then they gain knowledge about
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indian
culture with plethora of curiosity. Like if, they eat greens with maize chapati then they will without a doubt, thanks to the
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india
.

IELTS essay Today, people can use the internet to learn about the culture and lifestyle of the people of other countries. So, there is no need to travel to other countries to learn their culture. Agree or disagree.

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