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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.

It is thought by some people that sharing some ideas in scientific, business and academic research work as many as possible is good. Some argued that details are expensive and should be treated as one and not given out freely. in my opinion, I believe that giving out informations should be free for every one so as to save, promotes health, restored and preserve human life to reality. One evident benefit of giving out ideas freely, is that it will help in educating people around us on a particular updates in a system. For example, in the academic world My parents insisted I should go to the university locations to login and pay for some course fees, but I informed about the latest improvement by the management concerning the use of online portal for several a activities relating to school. there fore, this informations and clearly changed the mind set of elderly one and also educate them as well. Another reason, is in the aspect of providing essential details freely is in the aspect of business, advertisement has made people to be aware of several business across the globe without directly assessing. For example, I recently applied for a job at an institution Andrew I was able to get the full details of job description from the institution web. When Information is given out freely without cost it helps to safe guard people. Same goes for scienctific Information, people want to know the latest Theories, For example, my mother complained of an headache and able to identify through the booklets that paracetamol helps to relieve aches. On the other hand, it is often percieved that informations should be conserved and not given in details freely without a cost, most especially in scientific reserch, business and academic world. many details are gotten from many criteria, it involves paying for advertising and publishing on schools websites daily, it includes encountering harsh weather conditions to collect, analyse and review data for scienctific proof. It involves taking a high risk in business platforms, and media house for business. For example, it was announced recently in my country this year, that the government spend about 30 billion naira in scientific research for procurement of the ebola vaccine for all citizen. Therefore, some information should not be given freely with out a cost. In conclusion, mean while opinion will vary amount people because of their experiences, I believe information regarding scientific research, business and a academic should be free and easliy accessible to help promote health, preserve, restored human life to reality
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that sharing
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some
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ideas
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scientific
,
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business
and
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academic
research work as
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many
as possible is
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good
.
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argued that
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details
are expensive and should
be treated
as one and not
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given
out
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freely
.
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in
my opinion, I believe that giving out
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informations
should be free for every one
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so as to
save, promotes health, restored and preserve human life to reality.

One evident benefit of giving out
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ideas
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freely
, is that it will
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help
in educating
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people
around us on a particular updates in a system. For
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example
, in the
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academic
world My parents insisted I should go to the university locations to login and pay for
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some
course fees,
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but
I informed about the latest improvement by the management concerning the
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use
of online portal for several
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a activities
relating to school.
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there fore
,
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this
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informations
and
clearly
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changed
the mind set of elderly one and
also
educate them
as well
. Another reason, is in the aspect of providing essential
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details
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freely
is in the aspect of
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business
, advertisement has made
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people
to be aware of several
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business
across the globe without
directly
assessing. For
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example
, I recently applied for a job at an institution Andrew I was able to
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get
the full
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details
of job description from the institution web.
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When
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Information
is
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given
out
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freely
without cost it
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helps
to safe guard
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people
. Same goes for
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scienctific
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Information
,
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people
want to know the latest Theories, For
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example
, my mother complained of
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an
headache and able to identify through the booklets that paracetamol
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helps
to relieve aches.

On the other hand
, it is
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often
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percieved
that
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informations
should
be conserved
and not
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given
in
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details
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freely
without a cost, most
especially
in
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scientific
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reserch
,
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business
and
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academic
world.
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many
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details
are gotten
from
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many
criteria, it involves paying for advertising and publishing on schools websites daily, it includes encountering harsh weather conditions to collect,
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analyse
and review data for
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scienctific
proof. It involves taking a high
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risk
in
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business
platforms, and media
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house
for
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business
. For
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example
, it
was announced
recently in my country this year, that the
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government
spend about 30 billion
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naira
in
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scientific
research for procurement of the
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ebola
vaccine for all citizen.
Therefore
,
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some
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information
should not be
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given
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freely
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with out
a cost.

In conclusion
,
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mean while
opinion will vary amount
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people
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because
of their experiences, I believe
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information
regarding
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scientific
research,
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business
and
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a
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academic
should be free and
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easliy
accessible to
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help
promote health, preserve, restored human life to reality
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
425 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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