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Today people are living in a throwaway society where they use things for a short time only and then throw them away. What are the causes of this and what problems can it lead

poverty rising, due to low income and without a job. These kinds of could be. Currently, time in more masses are taking the stuff of which it already has used by rich families. However, those are only do using for a limited time for. nowadays, more than people are coming to urban areas for a better lifestyle. Because, where they are already living, that's where has not job vacancy and facilities. For example, a village has limited employment and who has the best degree, for not here available work. Therefore, they are changing their direction towards the developed city. When they did not get a place for living, then those human's do use used stuff for survival. Some time occurred with them like got a job and has no rest for a room or could be too expensive, that's why the homeless public has to sleep on throwaway things on. Secondly, the major problem is that cloth or daily using through can be big diseases. But no one knows that many people throw used needles with them. When a tramping human does laying as well as taught with the body, and then in case of H. I. V moreover, deadly reactions or direct death. One big issue is no food because hobo people have only that loafing which got by trash. To conclude, the Government should give a job there, where those are coming. who people do wrong work after wastage medical stuff fall with them, which only for donation, this is should not do.
poverty
rising, due to low income and without a
job
. These kinds of could be.
Currently
, time in more masses are taking the stuff of which it already has
used
by rich families.
However
, those are
only
do
using
for a limited time for.
nowadays
, more than
people
are coming to urban areas for a better lifestyle.
Because
, where they are already living, that's where has not
job
vacancy and facilities.
For example
, a village has limited employment and who has the best degree, for not here available work.
Therefore
, they are changing their direction towards the developed city. When they did not
get
a place for living, then those
human's
do
use
used
stuff for survival.
Some
time occurred with them like
got
a
job
and has no rest for a room or could be too expensive, that's why the homeless public
has to
sleep on throwaway things on.
Secondly
, the major problem is that cloth or daily using through can be
big
diseases.
But
no one knows that
many
people
throw
used
needles with them. When a tramping human does
laying
as well
as taught with the body, and then in case of H. I. V
moreover
, deadly reactions or direct death. One
big
issue is no food
because
hobo
people
have
only
that loafing which
got
by trash.
To conclude
, the
Government
should give a
job
there, where those are coming.
who
people
do
wrong
work after wastage medical stuff fall with them, which
only
for donation, this
is
should not do.
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IELTS essay Today people are living in a throwaway society where they use things for a short time only and then throw them away. What are the causes of this and what problems can it lead

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