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Today more countries import food. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Today more countries import food. What are the advantages and disadvantages KnJR1
The trend of importing food items has increased over the last decades, around the world. It helps people to get variety of food and also advantageous in terms of increased earning of food producers, but there are also disadvantages that should be taken into account. Firstly, one benefit of buying food stuffs from other countries is that it allows the people to eat various types of food iteams produced in different placeses of the world. Therefore, individuals can enjoy various tastes and they can receive all kinds of nutrients from it. For instance, some countries don not have sea, hence by importing sea food to those nations they can make sure that they are not deprived of calcium and omega three fattyacids. Another possible outcome is beneficial for the people who produce food. Their hardworking would be well paid as they get a wide global market. One the other hand, one significant problem when etables are globaly exported is that it requires use of chemicals and preservatives in ordre to preserve the items for long hours. These chemicals could cause seriuos health issues, such as cancer. Another possible drawback is that, people would be discouraged to cultivate if they get all kind of fruits and vegetables in the market by importing. As a result people will probably stay away from farming, leading to drastic changes in climate. The unexpected floods in Kerale, for example, is thought by the result of distruction of paddy fields. In conclusion, while importing of food iteams has many merits, it might leads to health sufferings and also evironmental issues, as it discourages local farming
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items has increased over the last decades, around the world. It
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helps
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people
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get
variety of
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food
and
also
advantageous in terms of increased earning of
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food
producers,
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stuffs from other countries is that it
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allows
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people
to eat various types of
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food
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iteams
produced in
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different
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placeses
of the world.
Therefore
, individuals can enjoy various
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tastes and
they can receive all kinds of nutrients from it.
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,
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some
countries
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don not
have sea,
hence
by
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importing
sea
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food
to those nations they can
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make
sure that they are not deprived of calcium and omega three
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fattyacids
. Another possible outcome is beneficial for the
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people
who produce
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food
. Their hardworking would be well paid as they
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get
a wide global market.
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the other hand, one significant problem when
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etables
are
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globaly
exported is that it requires
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use
of chemicals and preservatives in
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ordre
to preserve the items for long hours. These chemicals could cause
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seriuos
health issues, such as cancer. Another possible drawback is that,
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people
would
be discouraged
to cultivate if they
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get
all kind of fruits and vegetables in the market by
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importing
.
As a result
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people
will
probably
stay away from farming, leading to drastic
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changes
in climate. The unexpected floods in
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Kerale
,
for example
, is
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thought
by the result of
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distruction
of paddy fields.
In conclusion
, while
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importing
of
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food
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iteams
has
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many
merits, it might
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leads
to health sufferings and
also
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evironmental
issues, as it discourages local
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farming
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IELTS essay Today more countries import food. What are the advantages and disadvantages

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