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life was simpler without so much of technology .Give your views in no less than 200 words.

life was simpler without so much of technology. Give your views in no less than 200 words. VlWgD
technology is a part of modern life. We are passing our life into technology. Now a days we can see that every work is happening by technology. So, I do not believed that life was easier without so much of technology. It is not a convenient sentence, this is because technology safe our time and it build communication system. First of all, Currently much people doing their work by technology. Even top to bottom each and everyone involved by technology. They are doing hard task within short time by this option. For instance in hospital authority use lots of modern technology for treatment. Before this technology creation everything was tricky in hospital. secondly, all the world people lives approximately 700 billions. Everyone is passing a crucial moment and pathetic situation for covid 19. In this time we can not meet physically to each other also with our relatives. So in the mean time can connected with them on social network. For example, my one other biggest elder brother lives in abroad. We can get in touch every time in vartualy. It a huge advantage for everyone. On the other contrary, life is being easier by technology it, s true. However sometimes it might be harmful for people like some bad people makes bomb, gun also harmful equipment for destroy a important thing for their desire. So i think if government will be 0 tolerance about it, it will be reduce day by day. In conclusion, thus i believed that technology makes our life easy. I stand with my statement.
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technology
is a part of modern
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life
. We are passing our
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into
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technology
.
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we can
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see
that every work is happening by
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technology
.
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, I do not believed that
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life
was easier without
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so
much of
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technology
. It is not a convenient sentence, this is
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because
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technology
safe our
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time
and it
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build
communication system.
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First of all
,
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much
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people
doing their work by
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technology
. Even top to bottom each and
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everyone
involved by
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technology
. They are doing
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hard
task within short
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time
by this option.
For instance
in hospital authority
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use
lots of modern
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technology
for treatment.
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Before
this
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technology
creation everything was tricky in hospital.

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secondly
, all the world
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people
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lives
approximately 700 billions. Everyone is passing a crucial moment and pathetic situation for
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covid 19
. In this
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time
we can not
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meet
physically
to each other
also
with our relatives.
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So
in the mean
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time
can connected with them on social network.
For example
, my one other biggest elder brother
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lives
in abroad. We can
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get
in touch every
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time
in
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vartualy
.
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It
a huge advantage for everyone.

On the other contrary,
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life
is being easier by
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it, s true.
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sometimes
it might be harmful for
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people
like
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bad
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people
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makes
bomb, gun
also
harmful equipment for
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destroy
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a
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important
thing for their desire.
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So
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i
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think
if
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government
will be 0 tolerance about it, it will be
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reduce
day by day.

In conclusion
,
thus
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i
believed that
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technology
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makes
our
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life
easy. I stand with my statement.
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IELTS essay life was simpler without so much of technology. Give your views in no less than 200 words.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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