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Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult what are benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such place

Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult what are benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such place 05ql
Exploration is the most attractive activity which is taking place from the ancient period from napoleon to tourist in groups or individual. Obviously, it depends on the geography you are visiting. Some of the pros to visit such places are that we understand the topography of the area and we live in world with millions of different human mindsets, few of them are curious to figure out the facts and figures. Just for their knowledge purpose they like to visit the place. Small proportion of people find adventurous to explore harsh condition places like Antarctic, Sahara Desert, Himalayas, mount Everest. Its no matter what the purpose of visit is but still they will be called tourist after all if they contribute the economy of the localities and government of that place. For example Barry grills the actor which work in man vs wild series telecasted on discovery channel. He earns the fortune from that genre of surviving in wild and act as a motivation to all the audience watching him. So now a days social media, Television, OTT platforms have made every part of this world quiet approachable and practically possible to visit either its Everest or desert. Unless and until for the scientific, or understanding culture and way of living I don’t mind to visit that place. But this world cannot be rid of the greedy people. The illegal exporters are having eye to earn money either by destroying the habitat like killing the endangered species and selling there parts like skin, bones, body in dark market. In stark of contrast, changing the naturally rich placed to tourist attraction may pan out the negative outcomes. Deforestation will be initiated by government and builders to knuckle down on multiplying there investments. So, all in all I would like to conclude that our ecosystem should not be disturbed for our sake. It must be well preserved and restricted until and unless there is no harm to habitation staying there.
Exploration is the most attractive activity which is taking
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place
from the ancient period from napoleon to tourist in groups or individual.
Obviously
, it depends on the geography you are visiting.

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Some of the
pros to
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visit
such
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places
are that we understand the topography of the
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area and
we
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live
in world with millions of
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different
human mindsets, few of them are curious to figure out the facts and figures.
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Just
for their knowledge purpose they like to
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visit
the
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place
.
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Small
proportion of
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people
find adventurous to explore harsh condition
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places
like Antarctic, Sahara Desert, Himalayas,
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mount Everest
.
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no matter what the purpose of
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visit
is
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but
still
they will
be called
tourist
after all
if they contribute the economy of the localities and
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government
of that
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place
.
For example
Barry grills the actor which work in
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man
vs wild series
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telecasted
on discovery channel. He earns the fortune from that genre of surviving in wild and act as a motivation to all the audience watching him.
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So
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now a days
social media, Television,
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OTT
platforms have made every part of this world quiet approachable and
practically
possible to
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visit
either its Everest or desert. Unless and until for the scientific, or understanding culture and way of living I don’t mind to
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visit
that place.

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But
this world cannot
be rid
of the greedy
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people
. The illegal exporters are having eye to earn money either by destroying the habitat like killing the endangered species and selling there parts like skin, bones, body in dark market. In stark of contrast, changing the
naturally
rich placed to tourist attraction may pan out the
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negative
outcomes. Deforestation will
be initiated
by
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government
and builders to knuckle down on multiplying
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there
investments.

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So
, all in all I would like
to conclude
that our ecosystem should not
be disturbed
for our sake. It
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must
be
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well preserved
and restricted until and unless there is no harm to habitation staying there.
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IELTS essay Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult what are benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such place

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
6.0
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