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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Pd2X
Every individual has different acceptance levels about their current situations. Some people are of th opinion that, it is better to accept difficult circumstances while others advocate attempts to work hard and overcome such situations. In the scope of this essay, both the views will be thoroughly discussed. Personally, i side with the latter view. On the one hand, people tend to find satisfaction in their bad situations, be it an economical crisis or an unsatisfactory profession. In fact, this is mainly because such individuals do not have any other option but to survive in these conditions. For instance, most university students face difficuly in finding a job which matches their university major and are often forced to work in unsatisfactory conditions and maybe get bullied at work. Nevertheless, these people accept these circumstances just for the sake of making money and survive in the world.
Every individual has
different
acceptance levels about their
current
situations.
Some
people
are of
th opinion
that, it is better to accept difficult circumstances while others advocate attempts to work
hard
and overcome such situations. In the scope of this essay, both the views will be
thoroughly
discussed.
Personally
,
i
side with the latter view.

On the one hand,
people
tend to find satisfaction in their
bad
situations, be it an
economical
crisis or an unsatisfactory profession. In fact, this is
mainly
because
such individuals do not have any other option
but
to survive in these conditions.
For instance
, most university students face
difficuly
in finding a job which matches their university major and are
often
forced to work in unsatisfactory conditions and maybe
get
bullied at work.
Nevertheless
, these
people
accept these circumstances
just
for the sake of making money and survive in the world.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

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