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Today many people tend to have their own cars. Why? How to prevent this tendency?

Today many people tend to have their own cars. Why? How to prevent this tendency? P22X
Nowadays, the plenty of people incline to possess their private vehicles. A lot of reasons cause these tendencies due specific advantages of having particular autos. One of them relates to reducing travel time significantly. Mainly, when the people go to somewhere with public transport, it takes a lot rather than using own cars; however, possessing private cars provides people to reach anywhere more quickly. Another causation to this tendency supplies a feeling of freedom and satisfaction. Since Enormous people utilise mass transportation dramatically, some of them is disturbing and wants to feel more comfortable. Due to feeling comfy, many people begin to purchase cars. As a result, main reason why this trend happens since owning special cars decline the travel time and make people feel more convenient. However, there are some ways in order to avoid buying personal cars. If the government changes the system of transportation, in a word, improves its utilisation, it can be caused to increase using public transport. A lot of people complain condition of these vehicles and that is why, they refuse to go to somewhere thanks to bus, underground and so on. Furthermore, the people might change their behaviour so as to fix this issue. Most especially, humans in the public transport treat each other in the politeness way. It makes people descent to use mass transport even if they do not have enough money. Consequently, the government and people can pay attention to problem and find how to abandon it. To sum up, having own cars attract people think about more convenient travel rather than money and both government and people can only dispose this tendency themselves.
Nowadays, the
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plenty
of
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incline to possess their private vehicles.

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A lot of
reasons cause these tendencies due specific advantages of having particular autos. One of them relates to reducing travel time
significantly
.
Mainly
, when the
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people
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go to somewhere
with public
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transport
, it takes a lot
rather
than using
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own
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cars
;
however
, possessing private
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cars
provides
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people
to reach anywhere more
quickly
. Another causation to this tendency supplies a feeling of freedom and satisfaction. Since Enormous
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people
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utilise
mass transportation
dramatically
,
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some
of them is disturbing and wants to feel more comfortable. Due to feeling comfy,
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many
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people
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begin
to
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purchase
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cars
.
As a result
, main reason why this trend happens since owning special
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cars
decline the travel time and
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make
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people
feel more convenient.

However
, there are
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some
ways in order to avoid buying personal
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cars
. If the
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government
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changes
the system of transportation, in a word,
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improves
its
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utilisation
, it can
be caused
to increase using public
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transport
.
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A lot of
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people
complain condition of these vehicles and
that is
why, they refuse to
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go to somewhere
thanks to bus, underground and
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so
on.
Furthermore
, the
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people
might
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change
their
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behaviour
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so as to
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fix
this issue. Most
especially
, humans in the public
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transport
treat each other in the politeness way. It
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makes
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people
descent to
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use
mass
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transport
even if they do not have
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enough
money.
Consequently
, the
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government
and
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people
can pay attention to problem and find how to abandon it.

To sum up, having
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own
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cars
attract
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people
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think
about more convenient travel
rather
than money and both
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government
and
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people
can
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only
dispose this tendency themselves.
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IELTS essay Today many people tend to have their own cars. Why? How to prevent this tendency?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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