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Today, learning is always a top priority for parents for their children

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Today, learning is always a top priority for parents for their children. Because it is an important milestone for a student's development. We all know that schools have two modes for parents to choose from: public school and private school. I will give some differences between the two schools so that we can have an objective view and choose the right school for the family's needs and economic conditions. First, the difference in tuition fees between public and private schools. For example, the tuition fee of a private school will be three times or even five times higher than that of a public school. Next, private schools will have better facilities than public schools. Finally, the number of students in a class in a private school is only 15 to 20 students. While the public school has up to 40 to 50 students. In summary, these are the differences between public and private schools
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milestone for a student's development. We all know that
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have two modes for parents to choose from:
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and
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. I will give
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differences between the two
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that we can have an objective view and choose the right
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for the family's needs and economic conditions.
First
, the difference in tuition fees between
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will be three times or even five times higher than that of a
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,
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will have better facilities than
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15 to 20 students.
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has up to 40 to 50 students. In summary, these are the differences between
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IELTS essay Today, learning is always a top priority for parents for their children

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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