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Today I finishing from the first a lesson for eilts studying. I am listening to conversation about pets at British. And 47% of people in British had pets at home like dogs, cats, rabbits and parrots. They often called “ a nation of pet lovers “ . Also they talk about sound of different animals.

Today I finishing from the first a lesson for eilts studying. I am listening to conversation about pets at British. And 47% of people in British had pets at home like dogs, cats, rabbits and parrots. They often called “ a nation of pet lovers “. Also they talk about sound of different animals. QVEeK
Today I finishing from the first a lesson for eilts studying. I am listening to conversation about pets at British. And 47% of people in British had pets at home like dogs, cats, rabbits and parrots. They often called “ a nation of pet lovers “. Also they talk about sound of some animals at different countries like sheep “baa baa” or pig “ boo boo “. Also the first organization opened for animals in British.
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IELTS essay Today I finishing from the first a lesson for eilts studying. I am listening to conversation about pets at British. And 47% of people in British had pets at home like dogs, cats, rabbits and parrots. They often called “ a nation of pet lovers “. Also they talk about sound of different animals.

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