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Nowadays it is very popular to be technology/internet literate. Some people say that these skills will replace the use of books as main source of information and entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays it is very popular to be technology/internet literate. Some people say that these skills will replace the use of books as main source of information and entertainment. YBP1N
The advancement in the technology provides easy access to internet and it is famous now learning online. Some people believe that virtual study is the primary source of data and enjoy which also eliminates reading physical books. I totally disagree to this statement as there are enormous benefits with printed material and those can not be met using internet study. To begin with, reading a book gives a lot of pleasure and improves readers concentration. In other words, people who often read books will never feel stress rather they will be more focused on the content. For example, while I was preparing for IELTS exam, I studied different books with high attention and felt comfortable as well. Another point to add, the source of information is realiable in books as they are authentic before they are being published and this is the key problem with online material. Continuing the learning online gives more strain on eyes and that leads to some sight problems. A previous study discovered that the growth in eye-problems are due to more time spent on computers and other gadgets. Moreover, while learning online and saving information on devices can be a problem when device is crashed as we cannot restore all the valuable data. And this problem of losing information is never going to be happened with a physical book. In conclusion, though there are some benefits with online literature but other problems are more severe. On the other hand, using books not only gives joy but also more importantly the subject is verified.
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believe that virtual study is the primary source of data and enjoy which
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disagree to this statement as there are enormous benefits with printed material and those can not
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using internet study.

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a lot of
pleasure and
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improves
readers concentration. In
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people
who
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read
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will never feel
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stress
rather
they will be more focused on the content.
For example
, while I was preparing for IELTS exam, I studied
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different
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books
with high attention and felt comfortable
as well
. Another point to
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, the source of information is
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realiable
in
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books
as they are authentic
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before
they are
being published
and this is the key
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with
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online
material.

Continuing the learning
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online
gives more strain on eyes and that leads to
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sight
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problems
. A previous study discovered that the growth in eye-problems are due to more time spent on computers and
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other
gadgets.
Moreover
, while learning
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online
and saving information on devices can be a
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problem
when device
is crashed
as we cannot restore all the valuable data. And this
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problem
of losing information is never going to
be happened
with a physical book.

In conclusion
, though there are
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benefits with
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online
literature
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but
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other
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problems
are more severe. On the
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other
hand, using
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books
not
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only
gives joy
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also
more
importantly
the subject
is verified
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays it is very popular to be technology/internet literate. Some people say that these skills will replace the use of books as main source of information and entertainment.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.5
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