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Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experience.

Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. EElq
It is a fact that manufacturing companies spend a huge amount of money in order to advertise their products.  Although many people believe that consumers purchase various products because of the influence of advertisements,  some others argue against it.  This essay will discuss both arguments. Today’s advertisements are strong enough to attract any kind of people.  Most of the advertisements are over exaggerated representation of the real product.  Vulnerable people often fell in this trap and purchase low quality materials unnecessarily.  Moreover,  advertisements sometimes target certain age groups,  such as schoolchildren and adolescents.  In order to attract such immature population,  advertising companies make use of prominent singers or actors. Since adolescents have a tendency to imitate their favorite icons,  they purchase the product.  Apart from this,  many people grab the newly launched products in order to increase their pride in the society.  On the other hand,  many people purchase products by watching the advertisement,  if they are likely to improve their lifestyle.  For instance,  if a busy person comes to see an advertisement about a new time saving home appliance,  he or she is more likely to purchase that item.  In addition,  if the product is good in quality and really meats the expectation of the buyer,  it will get mouth publicity.  This will surely improve the sales of the particular product.  Furthermore,  there are many people who are keen on advanced technologies.  Such people often buy latest products by thinking that they simplify their life. To conclude,  I think advertisement play an important role in improving the sales of a product.  Despite the fact that advertisements are not real,  an increasing number of people still fall in their trap.
It is a fact that manufacturing 
companies
 spend a huge amount of money in order to advertise their products.  Although 
many
 
people
 believe that consumers 
purchase
 various products 
because
 of the influence of advertisements,
 
some
 others argue against it.  This essay will discuss both arguments.

Today
’s advertisements are strong 
enough
 to attract any kind of 
people
.  Most of 
the


advertisements
 are 
over exaggerated
 representation of the real product.  Vulnerable 
people
 
often
 fell in this trap and 
purchase
 low quality materials 
unnecessarily
.  
Moreover
,
 
advertisements 
sometimes
 target certain age groups,
 
such as schoolchildren and adolescents.  In order to 
attract


such
 immature population,
 
advertising 
companies
 
make
 
use
 of prominent singers or actors.

Since adolescents have a tendency to imitate their favorite icons,
 
they 
purchase
 the product.  Apart from this,
 
many
 
people
 grab the 
newly
 launched products in order to increase their pride in the society.  On the other hand,
 
many
 
people
 
purchase
 products by watching the advertisement,
 
if they 
are


likely
 to 
improve
 their lifestyle.  For instance,
 
if a busy person 
comes
 to 
see
 an advertisement about a new time saving home appliance,
 
he or she is more likely to 
purchase
 that item.  In addition,
 
if the product is 
good
 in quality and 
really
 meats the expectation of the buyer,
 
it will 
get
 mouth publicity.  This will 
surely
 
improve
 the sales of the particular product.  
Furthermore
,
 
there are 
many
 
people
 who are keen on advanced technologies.  Such 
people
 
often
 
buy
 
latest
 products by thinking that they simplify their life.

To conclude,
 
think
 advertisement play an 
important
 role in improving the sales of a product.  Despite the fact that advertisements are not real,
 
an increasing number of 
people
 
still
 fall in their trap.
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