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Today family members eat fewer meals together ,what is this cause is it a positive or negative trend.

Today family members eat fewer meals together, what is this cause is it a positive or negative trend. m5xEd
Modern lile has now become so hectic that one cannot imagine life without tensions. thus it would be living in fool's paradise to think of a life without stress cause of nowadays housholds, eat less food together Firstly, I will enumerate the majot 'cause of this problemetis issue, futhermore discuss myopinion The foremost season behind this alarming situation is that in today's world both of the parents are workaholic a as a result they do not have time to spend with their near and dear ones. Secondly, a lot of People are fregmented from the Joint family and now living in a nuclear family, alternatively they lack moral and ethics likewise eating a cuisine with our loved ones. In a nutsheell it is in one's own hand to reduce stress and live a prosperous life. Analyzing the causes, there are ample of negatives aspects of this problem. Family plays a integral role and when people do not spend a quality time with their dearest ones, eventually they become rough and rude like a savage. Moreover, the stress level ultimately increaaw which further lead to some serious health hazards take for instance depression and so on. To recapitualte, according to the above mentioned paragraphs friends and gaurdians are prominent in one's family, therefore making memories with them, while taking meals is joyful, last but not least giving time to one's who have affection for you are best thinh in the world yo lead a cheerful life.
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thus
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fool's paradise to
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life without
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living in a nuclear
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,
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they lack moral and ethics

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a prosperous life.

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plays
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integral role and when
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people
do not spend a quality time with their dearest
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,
eventually
they become rough and rude like a savage.
Moreover
, the
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stress
level
ultimately
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further
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serious health hazards take
for instance
depression and
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, according to the above mentioned paragraphs friends and
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,
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making memories with them, while taking meals is joyful, last
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giving time to one's who have affection for you are best
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lead a cheerful life.

IELTS essay Today family members eat fewer meals together, what is this cause is it a positive or negative trend.

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