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Mankind has been and will continue to be universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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language
extending around the globe and it is a particle e impossible to understand all the
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language
for an individual to express their feelings to
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people
of other culture
therefore
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music
act as a
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meditur
among
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people
to understand their feeling and
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people
can express themselves through
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teams and
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music
without understanding the lyrics of particular
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language
.
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Jackson roll no word pop
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singer
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language
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English and
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audience
through his musical cave
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like India and
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middle East
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,
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will
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as a universal
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in the future
as well
. Me the trend of fusion
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music
is becoming more common these days as artists collaborate with
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singer
and
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director of other countries and composed the
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music
of song that
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worldwide full
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to reach out for a wider
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and
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conclusion, I
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express themselves and in my prospective it will continue to do
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in the future
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different
countries collaborating and releasing their song to reach a wider
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IELTS essay Mankind has been and will continue to be universal language of mankind.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
293 words
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