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To succeed in a business, one should learn maths

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It is believed that know maths is necessary for an enterprise. Personally, I think that is not only factor that to be succeed in a business and I would state other equally requirements for a business to control. To comments with economic submarines why many people have believed that being able to do math is significant in merchandising. It is common knowledge that maths play an essential role in operating a business. First it is important to making the calculation is the nature off the business, specifically in trading commercial products, analyze business report. Without knowing maths that enterpreneur will fall into trouble and the year of work would not be able to drive. This is because every person who wants to start their own business will begin with learning maths and it can be a reason for to defeat in a work in case do not know other skillsOn the other hand on that on that involves interpreneurship should be know other traits. First of all business man needs to have a great leadership in order to lead thriving business. To illustrate, they need to understand others feelings and conditions by this way they can be establishing a strong and equal relationship between customers partners and employees. From this way they can become more successful and sensible business person they also should to identify the missions and the reason for the corporation and draw a clear path for the employees to follow. If a human has a such ability, they become a sociable and lucky business person. To conclude, although I do not describe the important role of maths in trading actions. I believe that other characteristic is like a being a visionary leader and an empathic can help a company prosperous.
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that know
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maths
is necessary for an enterprise.
Personally
, I
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think
that is
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factor that to be
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succeed
in a
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business
and I would state
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other
equally
requirements for a
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business
to control. To comments with economic submarines why
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many
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people
have believed that being able to do
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math
is significant in merchandising. It is common knowledge that
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maths play
an essential role in operating a
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business
.
First
it is
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important
to
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making
the calculation is the nature off the
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business
,
specifically
in trading commercial products, analyze
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business
report. Without knowing
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maths
that
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enterpreneur
will fall into trouble and the year of work would not be able to drive. This is
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because
every person who wants to
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start
their
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own
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business
will
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begin
with learning
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maths
and it can be a reason for to defeat in a work in case do not know
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other
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the
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hand
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should be
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traits.
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business
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man
needs to have a great leadership in order to lead thriving
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business
. To illustrate, they need to understand others feelings and conditions by this way they can be establishing a strong and equal relationship between customers partners and employees. From this way they can become more successful and sensible
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
business
person they
also
should to identify the missions and the reason for the corporation and draw a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
path for the employees to follow. If a human has a such ability, they become a sociable and lucky
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business
person.
To conclude
, although I do not
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describe
the
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important
role of
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maths
in trading actions. I believe that
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other
characteristic is like a being a visionary leader and an empathic can
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help
a
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company
prosperous.
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IELTS essay To succeed in a business, one should learn maths

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1 paragraphs
293 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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