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To play a leader's role is difficult task, so one should prefer to follow a leader than being a leader himself. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, leading a community is not only risky but also challenging, leadership and decision making skills are needed to mobilize the crowd and to take right decision. So, it is relatively easy to follow a leader instead of being a leader. I agree with the given statement, which will be proved in the upcoming paragraphs. The first and foremost reason of showing agreement with the given notion is that being a head can sometimes be life threatening and can effect your personal life. So leading a community or group is not easy secondly, it requires a lot of time as well as sacrifices. It is important to have trust of whole community on them. Another important reason is that, to become a commander you must have strong financial background. Connection with political parties is also required. They can not go outside without any protection. One who want to lead, they have to spend money on community problems. It is important for them to give statements wisely. They are the main target of public as they criticise them for their mistakes. Last but not least, they can not spend proper time with their families as they have to face lots of problems. Conclusively, leading a group is not an easy task. As leaders are not considered respectable. In simple words, to follow a ruler is far safer and does not require much efforts. Hence, it is easy to follow a leader than being a leader.
Nowadays, leading a
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also
challenging, leadership and
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decision making
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skills
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to mobilize the crowd and to take right decision.
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easy
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leader
instead
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leader
. I
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agree
with the
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statement, which will
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in the upcoming paragraphs.

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first
and foremost reason of showing agreement with the
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given
notion is that being a head can
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sometimes
be life threatening and can effect your personal life.
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So
leading a
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community
or group is not
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easy
secondly
, it requires
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a lot of
time
as well
as sacrifices. It is
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important
to have trust of whole
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community
on them.

Another
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important
reason is that, to become a commander you
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must
have strong financial background. Connection with political parties is
also
required. They can not go outside without any protection. One who want to lead, they
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have to
spend money on
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community
problems. It is
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important
for them to give statements
wisely
. They are the main target of public as they
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criticise
them for their mistakes. Last
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but
not least, they can not spend proper time with their families as they
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have to
face lots of problems.

Conclusively
, leading a group is not an
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easy
task.
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As
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leaders
are not considered respectable. In simple words, to follow a ruler is far safer and does not require
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much
efforts.
Hence
, it is
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easy
to follow a
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leader
than being a
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leader
.
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IELTS essay To play a leader's role is difficult task, so one should prefer to follow a leader than being a leader himself.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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