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Describe a Television programmes

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In my country, there are lots of types of TV programs like The news, comedy shows, game shows and so on, but my favorite TV program is The news because it helps me provide information about my country and the world. For example, the people can know how the covid-19 pandemic is going. I usually watch TV in my free time with my favorite movie like Pokémon movie, Doraemon movie. It’s a movie Crowd-pleasers and blockbuster. I spend about 2 hours watching TV, but on the weekend, I spend 3 hours watching the box. I like lying down on the couch to watch TV, but when I was child, I spend about 5 hours watching the box. I usually watch TV at home in the living room. Sometimes, I watch TV in the bedroom for some reasons. Firstly, sometimes, I can’t sleep, I turn on the TV. About 10 minutes, I was asleep. Secondly, sometimes, my house has a guest; I usually go to my bedroom to watch TV. The TV three decades ago, it was smaller than TV now. It’s also not connected to the internet. It's thicker than a TV now and has a black-and-white screen. The TV can help me understand the lessons when I'm not studying at school. For example, when I’m sick I can’t study and I lost the lessons. Thanks to TV, I’m able to understand the lessons. . To sum up, I’m a couch potato for some reasons. Firstly, watching TV can help me provide information about my country and the world. For example, I know how the covid-19 pandemic is going. Secondly, watching the box can help me put your feet up and release my study burdens. As you know, I’m a full-time student at My Phuoc secondary school; I’m very busy with my school work. What’s more, I also go to extra class to study, so I’m stressed out.
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, game
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shows
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on,
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my favorite TV program is The news
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because
it
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helps
me provide information about my country and the world.
For example
, the
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people
can know how the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
pandemic is going.

I
usually
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watch
TV in my free time with my favorite
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movie
like Pokémon
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movie
,
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Doraemon
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movie
. It’s a
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movie
Crowd-pleasers and blockbuster. I spend about 2 hours watching TV,
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but
on the weekend, I spend 3 hours watching the box. I like lying down on the couch to
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watch
TV,
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but
when I was child, I spend about 5 hours watching the box.
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I
usually
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watch
TV at home in the living room.
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Sometimes
, I
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watch
TV in the bedroom for
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some
reasons.
Firstly
,
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sometimes
, I can’t sleep, I turn on the TV. About 10 minutes, I was asleep.
Secondly
,
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sometimes
, my
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house
has a guest; I
usually
go to my bedroom to
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watch
TV. The TV three decades ago, it was smaller than TV
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now
. It’s
also
not connected to the internet. It's thicker than a TV
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now
and has a black-and-white screen. The TV can
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help
me understand the lessons when I'm not studying at school.
For example
, when I’m sick I can’t study and I lost the lessons. Thanks to TV, I’m able to understand the lessons.
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To sum up, I’m a couch potato for
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some
reasons.
Firstly
, watching TV can
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help
me provide information about my country and the world.
For example
, I know how the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
pandemic is going.
Secondly
, watching the box can
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help
me put your feet up and release my study burdens. As you know, I’m a full-time student at My
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Phuoc
secondary school; I’m
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very
busy with my school work. What’s more, I
also
go to extra
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class
to study,
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so
I’m
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stressed
out.

IELTS essay Describe a Television programmes

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
318 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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