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To me being a Georgian woman is a huge responsibility, to be a woman based in Georgia can be a challenge, it means to be someone who will fight for equality, rights and peace. Being a woman, is a fight to be seen and heard, to fight old toxic traditions and double standarts which we face in our everyday life especially in Georgia. On the other hand, throught those years there is a significant difference showing in society and this change is for better, but there still is a lot of discrimination out there and it is for me as a Georgian woman huge responsibility to fight for equality.

To me being a Georgian woman is a huge responsibility, to be a woman based in Georgia can be a challenge, it means to be someone who will fight for equality, rights and peace. Being a woman, is a fight to be seen and heard, to fight old toxic traditions and double standarts which we face in our everyday life especially in Georgia. On the other hand, throught those years there is a significant difference showing in society and this change is for better, but there still is a lot of discrimination out there and it is for me as a Georgian woman huge responsibility to fight for equality. 7LlX2
To me being a Georgian woman is a huge responsibility, to be a woman based in Georgia can be a challenge, it means to be someone who will fight for equality, rights and peace. Being a woman, is a battle to be seen and heard, to fight aged toxic traditions and double standards which we face in our everyday life especially in Georgia. On the other hand, through those years there is a significant difference showing in society and this change is for better, on the contrary there still is a lot of discrimination out there and it is for me as a Georgian woman huge responsibility to fight for equality.
To me being a Georgian
woman
is a huge responsibility, to be a
woman
based in Georgia can be a challenge, it means to be someone who will fight for equality, rights and peace.

Being a
woman
, is a battle to be
seen
and heard, to fight aged toxic traditions and double standards which we face in our everyday life
especially
in Georgia.

On the other hand
, through those years there is a significant difference showing in society and this
change
is for better,
on the contrary
there
still
is
a lot of
discrimination out there and it is for me as a Georgian
woman
huge responsibility to fight for equality.
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IELTS essay To me being a Georgian woman is a huge responsibility, to be a woman based in Georgia can be a challenge, it means to be someone who will fight for equality, rights and peace. Being a woman, is a fight to be seen and heard, to fight old toxic traditions and double standarts which we face in our everyday life especially in Georgia. On the other hand, throught those years there is a significant difference showing in society and this change is for better, but there still is a lot of discrimination out there and it is for me as a Georgian woman huge responsibility to fight for equality.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
111 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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