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To break a habit is to stop doing something that you used to do, for example, to stop eating dessert. Explain how to break habit. Include specific details in your answer

To break a habit is to stop doing something that you used to do, for example, to stop eating dessert. Explain how to break habit. Include specific details in your answer Q83jy
Should people want to break their habit, they should change it to forbidden behavior. It is so hard to abandon some behaviors which you do it a lot of time and one used to do it. At first stage, people should think about this decision and be serious to stop their habit since if they have a doubt, they will lose in this way. In the second stage, individuals must find other behavior to do instead of that behavior. For instance people who use cigarette can chew gum when they need cigarette or do exercise. Finally, they should be proud of themselves that can change their habit and make better life for themselves. All of all, change habit is so hard; however, it is not impossible and people can do it with good plan.
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people
want to break their
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habit
, they should
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change
it to forbidden
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behavior
. It is
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so
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hard
to abandon
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behaviors
which you do it
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a lot of
time and one
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used
to do it. At
first
stage,
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people
should
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think
about this decision and be serious to
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stop
their
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habit
since if they have a doubt, they will lose in this way. In the second stage, individuals
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must
find other
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behavior
to do
instead
of that
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behavior
.
For instance
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people
who
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use
cigarette can chew gum when they need cigarette or do exercise.
Finally
, they should be proud of themselves that can
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change
their
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habit
and
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make
better life for themselves. All of all,
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change
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habit
is
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so
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hard
;
however
, it is not impossible and
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people
can do it with
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good
plan.
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IELTS essay To break a habit is to stop doing something that you used to do, for example, to stop eating dessert. Explain how to break habit. Include specific details in your answer

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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