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Should the government help people pay back their student loans? Use the information from the article to support your view. You have 50 minutes to read the article below and write a 300-word essay.

Should the government help people pay back their student loans? Use the information from the article to support your view. You have 50 minutes to read the article below and write a 300-word essay. gD27l
Recently, people need to have education for their living. Some of students pay by their family whereas some are borrow from government. There are many reasons that students cannot pay their studying like increasing of university tuition fee, the problem of family income, and low salary job. That cause many questions were are asked: should government forgive with students loan debt or not? , how to figure out with these troubles? . In my thought, it is not a good idea to pay for student loans debts because it can effect social economic. According to A Facebook group called” Cancel student loans debt to stimulate the Economy” that fabric by a New York attorney named Robert Applebaum who said that the bank account of the middle class Americans were saved lots of money that reduce the worse social economic by forgiveness student loan debt. Also it helps to drive country and society economic growth. On the other hands, many people have contract ideas as expenditure of university tuition increases from year to year that the gorvernment cannot effort at all. And there are no clearly information for who to pay the debt or pay back by taxpayer funds. Moreover, Brian Kumnick analyst at Findlaw wonder that how can lender get back their compensation, if we have the program of forgiveness student loan debt. Following the article, it is a good idea to lend money for students to support their studying. When people are educated, it means that country and society is development and improvement. Furthermore, government should clarify with student’s background before lending the money. After students complete their studying, government should find job for them and ask them to pay back by cutting their small percentage of salary. Consequently, it will be able to reduce the stress of people and add knowledge and know-how for them as well. As a result, forgiveness the student loan debt is impossible for government because of the limitation of government’s financial. Instead, government should look for other solutions to solve with the trouble such as cutting the small percentage of students’ salary and finding the career.
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people
need to have education for their living.
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of
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students
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pay
by their family whereas
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some
are borrow from
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government
. There are
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many
reasons that
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students
cannot
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pay
their studying like increasing of university tuition fee, the problem of family income, and low salary job. That cause
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many
questions were
are asked
: should
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government
forgive with
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students
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loan
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debt
or not?
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,
how to figure out with these troubles?
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In my
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thought
, it is not a
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good
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idea
to
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pay
for
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student
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loans
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debts
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because
it can effect social economic.

According to A Facebook group called” Cancel
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student
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loans
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debt
to stimulate the Economy” that fabric by a New York attorney named Robert
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Applebaum
who said that the bank account of the middle
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class
Americans
were saved
lots of money that
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reduce
the worse social economic by forgiveness
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student
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loan
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debt
.
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it
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helps
to drive country and society economic growth.

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many
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people
have contract
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ideas
as expenditure of university tuition increases from year to year that the
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gorvernment
cannot effort at all. And there are no
clearly
information for
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who
to
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pay
the
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debt
or
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pay
back by taxpayer funds.
Moreover
, Brian
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Kumnick
analyst at
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Findlaw
wonder that how can lender
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get
back their compensation, if we have the program of forgiveness
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student
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loan
debt.

Following the article, it is a
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good
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idea
to lend money for
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students
to support their studying. When
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people
are educated
, it means that country and society is development and improvement.
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,
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government
should clarify with
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student’s
background
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before
lending the money. After
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students
complete their studying,
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government
should find job for them and ask them to
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pay
back by cutting their
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small
percentage of salary.
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, it will be able to
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reduce
the
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stress
of
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people
and
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add
knowledge and know-how for them
as well
.

As a result
, forgiveness the
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student
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loan
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debt
is impossible for
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government
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because
of the limitation of
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government’s
financial.
Instead
,
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government
should look for other solutions to solve with the trouble such as cutting the
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small
percentage of
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students’
salary and finding the career.
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IELTS essay Should the government help people pay back their student loans? Use the information from the article to support your view. You have 50 minutes to read the article below and write a 300-word essay.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
353 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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