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To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v.3

To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v. 3
IN THIS MODERN ERA, WE HAVE FORGOTTED THE IMPORTANT FEATURES OF ART, WHICH MAKE THEM MORE SPECIAL AND CHANCES TO WIN AN AWARD. IT IS SAID THAT, NOW, ANY KIND OF ART BECOME FAMOUS WITHOUT EVEN IT HAS GOOD QUALITY. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW, THE NUMBER IS DECREASING FOR ART, WHICH SHOWS THE MAIN POINTS BECAUSE PEOPLE DO NOT NOTICE THEM, BUT BECOME POPULAR AND ACTUAL PAINTINGS ARE BECOMING UNTOUCHED. TO BEGIN WITH, WE HAVE SEEN THAT, PEOPLE, NOWADAYS, DO NOT LOOK AT THE VITAL THINGS IN ART WORK DONE BY ARTISTS. TO BE CLEAR, THEY EVEN DO NOT KNOW WHAT MAKES A GOOD CRAFT. THEY BUY IT BEACAUSE IT SEEM TO BE BEAUTIFUL OR FANCY. BUT, THE ACTUAL VALUES OF THEM ARE IGNORED. FOR EXAMPLE, SOME OF THE PAINTINGS SEND MESSAGES TO OUR NEW GENERATIONS ABOUT THE IMPROVEMENTS THAT THEY NEED TO DO FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. BUT, PEOPLE IGNORE THESE TYPE OF QUALITIES WHICH ARE VERY IMPORTANT AND FOR THIS REASON ANY SCULPTURE BECOME PART OF MUSEUM. MOREOVER, SOME WORK OF ARTS BECOME UNPOPULAR BECAUSE THEY ARE BEING DONE BY POOR PEOPLE ASLO IF THEY ILLUSTRATES VERY GOOG QUALITIES LIKE PRIZEFUL COLOURS. IN OTHER WORDS, I THINK, CRAFT MAKE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN PEOPLE BEFORE IT BE POPULAR. I HAVE SEEN THAT, CELEBRITIES WHO MAKE ANY ART WHICH IS DULL AND LACK IN MAKING BEAUTIFUL BECOME VALUABLE IN THIS WORLD AND BEING SELL FOR A HIGH RATE. SO, PEOPLE DO NOT LOOK AT THE QUALITIES IN CRAFT THEY SEE IF IT IS DONE BY A FAMOUS PERSON OR NORMAL ONE. TO SUMMARIZE, I BELIVE THAT, QUALITIES ARE LESS SEEN IN ANY CRAFT DUE TO SOME DIFFERENCES IN FAMOUS AND NORAML PEOPLE. THAT’S WHY, SOME VERY IMPORTANT PAINTING LOSS TO WIN AN AWARD AND SOME EVEN BECOME UNTOUCHED.
IN THIS MODERN ERA, WE HAVE
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FEATURES OF
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ART
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MAKE
THEM MORE SPECIAL AND CHANCES TO WIN AN AWARD. IT
IS SAID
THAT,
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FAMOUS
WITHOUT EVEN IT HAS
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GOOD
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QUALITY
. FROM MY POINT OF VIEW, THE NUMBER IS DECREASING FOR
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ART
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SHOWS
THE MAIN POINTS
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BECAUSE
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PEOPLE
DO NOT NOTICE THEM,
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BUT
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BECOME
POPULAR AND ACTUAL PAINTINGS ARE BECOMING UNTOUCHED.

TO
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WITH, WE HAVE
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PEOPLE
, NOWADAYS, DO NOT LOOK AT THE VITAL THINGS IN
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WORK DONE BY ARTISTS. TO BE
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CLEAR
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A
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IT
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IT SEEM TO BE
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BUT
, THE ACTUAL VALUES OF THEM ARE
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IGNORED
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SOME OF THE
PAINTINGS
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SEND
MESSAGES TO OUR NEW GENERATIONS ABOUT THE IMPROVEMENTS THAT THEY NEED TO DO FOR THE ENVIRONMENT.
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BUT
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PEOPLE
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QUALITIES
WHICH ARE
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IMPORTANT
AND
FOR THIS REASON
ANY SCULPTURE
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BECOME
PART OF MUSEUM.

MOREOVER
,
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WORK OF
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ARTS
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BECOME
UNPOPULAR
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BECAUSE
THEY ARE
BEING DONE
BY POOR
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PEOPLE
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ASLO
IF THEY
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ILLUSTRATES
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VERY
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LIKE
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COLOURS
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IN OTHER WORDS
, I
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BEFORE
IT BE POPULAR. I HAVE
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SEEN
THAT, CELEBRITIES WHO
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MAKE
ANY
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ART
WHICH IS DULL AND LACK IN MAKING
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BEAUTIFUL
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BECOME
VALUABLE IN THIS WORLD AND BEING
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SELL
FOR A HIGH RATE.
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SO
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IN
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THEY
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SEE
IF IT
IS DONE
BY A
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FAMOUS
PERSON OR NORMAL ONE.

TO SUMMARIZE
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I BELIVE
THAT,
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QUALITIES
ARE LESS
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SEEN
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DUE TO
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DIFFERENCES IN
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FAMOUS
AND
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NORAML
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PEOPLE
. THAT’S WHY,
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SOME
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VERY
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PAINTING LOSS TO WIN AN AWARD AND
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SOME
EVEN
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BECOME
UNTOUCHED.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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