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To achieve personal happiness, the relationships we have with other people (friends, colleagues, family) are more essential than every other thing. Issues like wealth and occupations take the second place. Write to support this claim.

To achieve personal happiness, the relationships we have with other people (friends, colleagues, family) are more essential than every other thing. Issues like wealth and occupations take the second place. Write to support this claim. wByAq

The growing pressures of the money-driven world we live in widely cause the gravitation towards material items. However, personal happiness is not achieved through things like work, wealth, and success. Though these things may be attractive and coveted, it does not refute the fact that relationships with friends, colleagues, and family members are the genuine secrets to living happily. This will be proven by bringing up the topic of wealthy superstars who steadily live lonely lives and the advice from elderly people based on experience. In the first place, to demonstrate that money cannot buy happiness, the life of certain famous people can be taken as an example. It is not uncommon to see singers, actors, and sportsmen living under the yoke of drugs and anti-depressives and living almost abandoned in priceless mansions, even though they have enormous bank accounts and all commodities we can imagine. This proves that fame and luxury were not enough for them to feel happy. To complement the idea, the advice given to the elders might be helpful. It is widely known that wisdom comes with age and it is true that most of our grandparents tell that they were truly happy when they gave birth to their children, and even happier when they saw their grandchildren coming to this world. Just to mention an example, even when the elders are sent to luxury care facilities, they are completely satisfied when relatives go there to pay a visit. Thus, in order to be peaceful no one needs richness but care from their relatives and friends. To conclude, genuine happiness can never be bought by wealth and everyone gets to realise this when they become old. It is true that relationships with friends, colleagues, and family members create happiness. Therefore, the greater the love you give, the greater you receive

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live
 in widely
 cause the gravitation towards material items. However
, personal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprosperitypeace of mindcontentmentenjoymentjoyglee
happiness
 is not achieved through things like work, wealth, and success. Though these things may be attractive and coveted, it does not refute the fact that relationships with friends, colleagues, and family members are the genuine secrets to living happily
. This will be proven
 by bringing up the topic of wealthy superstars who steadily
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live
 lonely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 and the advice from elderly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 based on experience.

In the first
 place, to demonstrate that money cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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happiness
, the life of certain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
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people
 can be taken
 as an example. It is not uncommon to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 singers, actors, and sportsmen living under the yoke of drugs and anti-depressives and living almost abandoned in priceless mansions, even though
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enough
 for them to feel happy.

To complement the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
, the advice This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 to the elders might be helpful. It is widely
 known that wisdom This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with age and it is true that most of our grandparents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 that they were truly
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saw
 their grandchildren coming to this world. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
Just
 to mention an example, even when the elders are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to luxury care facilities, they are completely satisfied when relatives go there to pay a visit. Thus
, in order to be peaceful no one needs richness This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 care from their relatives and friends.

To conclude
, genuine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprosperitypeace of mindcontentmentenjoymentjoyglee
happiness
 can never be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 by wealth and everyone This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
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realise
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old
. It is true that relationships with friends, colleagues, and family members create You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprosperitypeace of mindcontentmentenjoymentjoyglee
happiness
. Therefore
, the greater the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 you give, the greater you receive