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Time is precious for everyone if who will spend

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Time is precious for everyone if who will spend time taking important but we all know that if who waste his time so, I can explain. I request to other people that should admire that because my life is in danger of being able to see the full story here and there, but the fact is that in the new year and a half, and a few of the world and the rest of the day and age of consent of a new one of those things
Time is precious for everyone if who will spend time taking
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we all know that if who waste his time
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people
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my life is in
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danger
of being able to
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see
the full story here and there,
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but
the fact is that in the new year and a half, and a few of the world and the rest of the day and age of consent of a new one of those
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IELTS essay Time is precious for everyone if who will spend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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