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Throwing damaged items away rather than repair it

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My mother's generation had many skills young people lack today. In the past people could mend clothes sew buttons and fix a broken tip. But this not true of current generations who ten to replace rather than repair. This essay will discuss why these changes have occurred and what effects this having. Today life style is became very stylish and modern in this era people are adopting fashion and trendy things as compare to past. Therefore, people also changing themselves with new generation and try to pretending them as a socialist and modern person. In light of new on going situation so many people are replacing their clothes, furniture and home appliance with modern or trendy technologies and fashion. It has been rapidly increasing by watching there changes people are getting stimulated to follow the trend. This paragraph shows that how people are following or being addictive of new technologies. This change in attitude are increasing due to deskilled or impatience to repair old items. Which had been changing according to trend and environment. Most of us are become lazy to repair the damaged items. However, it is also happening by the changes of technology and modern society. Therefore, it has also effect on savings and environment. For example, if someone has bought new car if his old car was quite fine and in working condition just he bought that car to satisfied himself or full fill his desire this kind of unwanted expenses shows that it has been creating deskilled personality among the societies. In conclusion, today people are throwing used items rather than repair them. Wasting used products or throwing away it is also impact on environment and as well as on our social lives too and these kind of behavior arouses deskilled personality in among the people.
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fix
a broken tip.
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. This essay will discuss why these
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changes
have occurred and what effects this having.

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Today
life style is
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became
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very
stylish and
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modern
in this era
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people
are adopting fashion and trendy things as compare to past.
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people
also
changing themselves with
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new
generation and try to
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modern
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rapidly
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changes
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change
in attitude are increasing due to deskilled or impatience to
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old
items. Which had been changing according to trend and environment. Most of us
are become
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repair
the damaged items.
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, it is
also
happening by the
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changes
of technology and
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modern
society.
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effect on savings and environment.
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, if someone has
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car if his
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car was quite fine and in working condition
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he
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bought
that car to satisfied himself or full fill his desire this kind of unwanted expenses
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shows
that it has been creating deskilled personality among the societies.

In conclusion
,
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today
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are throwing
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items
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repair
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used
products or throwing away it is
also
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impact
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people
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IELTS essay Throwing damaged items away rather than repair it

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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