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making carbonated drinks.

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Information about the process of making the main carbonated drinks. Coca cola is carbonated drink. Stage one is water cleaning, filter, water softener, chemicals pump her went to second stage. Second stage heating evaporation carbonation, cooling pipe, carban dixide his drinks goes to third stage. Stage three was mixing tank for go to drink. His tank prepair to colouring, syup and flavour, filter. His drink go to fourth stage filtering and filling bottles filtering and filling cans. His drink go to fifth stage. Fifth stage was packing. Drinks packing after travel tempo to supermarket.
Information about the process of making the main carbonated
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drinks
. Coca cola
is carbonated
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.
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Stage
one is water cleaning, filter, water softener, chemicals pump her went to second
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stage
. Second
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stage
heating evaporation carbonation, cooling pipe,
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carban
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dixide
his
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drinks
goes to third
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stage
.
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Stage
three was mixing tank for go to
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drink
. His tank
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prepair
to
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colouring
,
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syup
and
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flavour
, filter. His
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drink
go to fourth
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stage
filtering and filling bottles filtering and filling cans.
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His
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drink
go to fifth
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. Fifth
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stage
was packing.
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Drinks
packing after travel tempo to supermarket.

IELTS essay making carbonated drinks.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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