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three most important rules that your parents often apply to you

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Hi, my name is VPT I’m from class 11A11. Today, I would like to tell you about the 3 most important rules that my parents often apply to me. First of all, one important rule in my family is that when eating, we shouldn’t watch TV. They think it's not good if they eat while watching TV because we won't be able to focus on eating. Therefore they think that rule will help us more focus and also shows respect. Another important rule in my family is that I have to keep my room tidy because it gives me a comfortable space to study effectively. The third important rule in my family is that we all go to sleep at 10. pm. My parents do believe that sleeping early brings good health rather than staying up late at night.
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in my family is that when eating, we shouldn’t
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TV. They
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us more focus and
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respect. Another
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in my family is that I
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my room tidy
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. The third
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in my family is that we all go to sleep at 10.
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IELTS essay three most important rules that your parents often apply to you

Essay
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1 paragraphs
139 words
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