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In the past students study in university of their own country.Nowadays they have more chance of study abroad.state advantages and disadvantages.

In the past students study in university of their own country. Nowadays they have more chance of study abroad. state advantages and disadvantages. 0lJ9q
In the last few years students have the craze of pursuing education from native land however this trend is changed in present times. Students migrate in another country for better education and getting degree and source of education. In this essay I shall examine both positive and negative aspect of learning in abroad before drawing a reasonable conclusion. With regards to education from overseas to begin with learner are able to survive in competition, this is because he or she might explore in new atmosphere where they learn different task independently. Thus leads to not only improve skills but also make them responsible while doing household chores manage time for work and study. As they realise the value of family as they live far away from home. On the other hand determinant effects of studying abroad cannot be overlooked. Sometimes many students are unable to speak with others due to language barriers and may suffer from isolation thus leads to homesickness. In addition to this college fees of universities are high and students are fail to pay bank loan which resultiong that they becomes debtors. As pupil who strongly believe in religion they are miss indian food and not eat meat while in cold region it is mandatory to eat for comfort. Morever it is hard to maintain a balance between work and study if they can't use effective manage time.
In the last few years
students
have the craze of pursuing
education
from native land
however
this trend is
changed
in present times.
Students
migrate in another country for better
education
and getting degree and source of
education
. In this essay I shall examine both
positive
and
negative
aspect of learning in abroad
before
drawing a reasonable conclusion.

With regards to
education
from overseas to
begin
with learner are able to survive in competition, this is
because
he or she might explore in new atmosphere where they learn
different
task
independently
.
Thus
leads to not
only
improve
skills
but
also
make
them responsible while doing household chores manage time for work and study. As they
realise
the value of family as they
live
far away from home.

On the other hand
determinant effects of studying abroad cannot
be overlooked
.
Sometimes
many
students
are unable to speak with others due to language barriers and may suffer from isolation
thus
leads to homesickness.
In addition
to this college fees of universities are high and
students
are fail to pay bank loan which
resultiong
that they
becomes
debtors. As pupil who
strongly
believe in religion they are miss
indian
food and not eat meat while in
cold
region it is mandatory to eat for comfort.
Morever
it is
hard
to maintain a balance between work and study if they can't
use
effective manage time.
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IELTS essay In the past students study in university of their own country. Nowadays they have more chance of study abroad. state advantages and disadvantages.

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