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this two graphs show the sources that united state use it from 1990 to 1980

this two graphs show the sources that united state use it from 1990 to 1980 KY8NR

These pie charts depict the main sources of energy in the United States, between 1980s and the 1990s. t is clear from the graph that the fossil fuels used more than the other types in both decades. According to what is shown, In 1990 33 percent of the energy of the US came from the oil. the other fussil fuels, which are coal and natural gas, where near the half. the nuclear power and hydroelectric power were not populer at that time the took both only 15%. Agreegate 1980s, the oil was the most common source by 42 per cent. then the natural gas and coal by 48 mark. and the hydroelectric and nuclear power had the same porportion wich is 5%. To sum up, we could say that in 1980s the fossil fuels use more than in 1990s; because in 1990 the United States started using clean sources for energy, which are the nuclear and hydroelectric powers.

These pie charts depict the main sources of energy in the United States, between 1980s and the 1990s. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterT
t
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph that the fossil fuels This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 more than the other types in both decades.

According to what is shown
, In 1990 33 percent of the energy of the US came from the oil. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
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fussil
 fuels, which are coal and natural gas, where near the half. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 and hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 were not Possible spelling mistake found.popular
populer
 at that time the took both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 15%.

Possible spelling mistake found.Agree gate
Agreegate
 1980s, the oil was the most common source by 42 per cent. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThen
then
 the natural gas and coal by 48 mark. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 the hydroelectric and nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
power
 had the same Possible spelling mistake found.proportion
porportion
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wich
 is 5%.

To sum up, we could say that The article is probably missing here: "in the 1980s".in the 1980s
in 1980s
 the fossil fuels This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 more than The article is probably missing here: "in the 1990s".in the 1990s
in 1990s
; This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 in 1990 the United States This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 using clean sources for energy, which are the nuclear and hydroelectric You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiontalentinfluencecapabilitypotentialcapacity
powers
. 