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This figure illustrates the difference in salary of people depending on their age and degree level. According to the data, the older an employee is, the greater salary he earns.

This figure illustrates the difference in salary of people depending on their age and degree level. According to the data, the older an employee is, the greater salary he earns. pa723

It can be seen that people in the age group 36-40 have the biggest wage. Their salary can be between 700 and 800 Pound per week, while graduate employees from 21 to 25 yeas old earn around 400 Pound. In addition, older employees have a smaller wage than those between 36-40 but the difference is not substantial. Furthermore, the earnings also differ according to the level of education. For instance, people who obtained only the first degree have a smaller wage than those who got a higher degree. Similarly, people with other type of education earn significantly more than graduates from other two groups. To sum up, the salary depends not only on the level of qualification but also on the age group of an employee.

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