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This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of homework.

This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of homework. 2KlG6
Nowaday, homework is becoming a noticeale problem for children. Most of teachers and parents support that homework assists children in improving learning process. However, others oppose this view and claim that homework makes children pressured and boring. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of homework. It can be said that homework has some noteworthy positive effects. Firstly, homework helps students to have time to practice theoretical knowledge learned in class. It is able to firmly grasp a certain knowledge, it is necessary to do it over and over again. Especially for difficult knowledge, practice becomes even more important. Seconly, homework teaches children to be independent, to take initiative and responsibility for completing a task, and it helps children to develop a sense of self-discipline. Doing school work at home helps the children to practice working alone without asking for help from their classmates and teachers. However, homework isn’t completely benefits, there are several negative aspects that should be taken into consideration. The serious disadvantage of homework that is pointless busy work can lead to a negative impression of a subject. This makes the children more bored with learning. An addition disadvantage of homework would be exercise overload. It makes children increase stressed. The combination of heavy homework loads and early school start times is a major cause of sleep deprivation and consequent stress for children. In conclusion, there are plus points to homework regarding to practice learning skills and self- discipline. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of increasing stressed and boring. Therefore, teachers should reconsider the amount of homework to be reasonable.
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Nowaday
,
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homework
is becoming a
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noticeale
problem for
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children
.
After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ("Most of the teachers") or simply say "Most teachers".
Most of teachers
and parents support that
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homework
assists
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children
in improving learning process.
However
, others oppose this view and claim that
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homework
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makes
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children
pressured and boring. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of homework.

It can
be said
that
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homework
has
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some
noteworthy
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positive
effects.
Firstly
,
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homework
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helps
students to have time to
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practice
theoretical knowledge learned in
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class
. It is able to
firmly
grasp a certain knowledge, it is necessary to do it over and over again.
Especially
for difficult knowledge,
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practice
becomes even more
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important
.
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Seconly
,
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homework
teaches
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children
to be independent, to take initiative and responsibility for completing a task, and it
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helps
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children
to develop a sense of self-discipline. Doing school work at home
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helps
the
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children
to
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practice
working alone without asking for
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help
from their classmates and teachers.

However
,
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homework
isn’t completely benefits, there are several
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negative
aspects that should
be taken
into consideration. The serious disadvantage of
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homework
that is
pointless busy work can lead to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impression of a subject. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the
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children
more bored with learning. An addition disadvantage of
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homework
would be exercise overload. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
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children
increase
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stressed
. The combination of heavy
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homework
loads and early school
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
times is a major cause of sleep deprivation and consequent
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
for children.

In conclusion
, there are plus points to
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homework
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regarding to
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practice
learning
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skills
and self- discipline.
However
, the downside would emerge
consequently
in terms of increasing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stressed
and boring.
Therefore
, teachers should reconsider the amount of
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homework
to be reasonable.
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IELTS essay This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of homework.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
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