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This chart shows us the different beetwen five different jams from 2009 to 2014. As we can see in this chart line in plum was popular on 2005,but after nine years the sales slumped to absolutely zero.

This chart shows us the different beetwen five different jams from 2009 to 2014. As we can see in this chart line in plum was popular on 2005, but after nine years the sales slumped to absolutely zero. lxY99
This chart shows us the different beetwen five different jams from 2009 to 2014. As we can see in this chart line in plum was popular on 2005, but after nine years the sales slumped to absolutely zero. If we look the sales of grape we can see that his sales increased to for almost forty procent. Starting with 2012 the seles of strawberry increased from 50 million sales for year to 70 million sales. Moving on the popularity cherry came down in 2011 but then realization augment since 2 million to 3 million. The price of raspberry jump smoothly, they go up vendition to more than 20 million.
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IELTS essay This chart shows us the different beetwen five different jams from 2009 to 2014. As we can see in this chart line in plum was popular on 2005, but after nine years the sales slumped to absolutely zero.

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