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Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment.

Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. 7pMg2
Culting-edge, the biggest menace for the whole world is environment issue. It is an undeniable fact that environmental - protection is an need of hour. Authorities chode should creat individual responsible for. care the environment. I agree with this statement and devote my opinion. To begin with, environment is public property because tree play key role in human life. To add, this reason to government grow the trees and creat garden, but after government should devote in public hand. To elaborates nowadays, on earth made ample of issues for environment. More-over few Nuo and Company work on this formuly. " Tree is life" उ cd as well as encorudge cell person for grow tree. To epitome, couple of years ago in australia authorities saved grow the trees. and curb the nature disuster. Thus, if in our contry each person is cure the bees and rise in number of this reason to human live the more comfortably. Apart from that government announce. 5 June is enviornment day. On other side, at a present, tot ample of mas masses leave the rural area and shift in æter urban area. Furthermore, this reason to inforth coming future made the enormous influnce in city like Tsunami and Other disaster. This reason to our regime is con Prevent this situation and encouraging for mushrooming enviornment. In other words, township is grown then direct effect on enviornment as well as, nowdays, ein urban areas air quality is low, they impact on human lifestyle. For instance, in india delhi air quality is very bad the whole world delhi is the first reaks in polluation. As a result, masses know about od precious enviornmut and care. . . To conclude, according to me, envionment is our priority this reason to care thick as well as growther grown too much trees predominantly in urban areus go mushrooming trees and plants.
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Culting-edge
, the biggest menace for the whole world is
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environment
issue. It is an undeniable fact that environmental
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-
protection is
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an
need of hour. Authorities
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chode
should
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creat
individual responsible for.
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care
the
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environment
. I
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agree
with this statement and devote my opinion.

To
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begin
with,
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environment
is public property
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because
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tree
play key role in human life. To
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add
, this
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reason
to
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government
grow the
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trees
and
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creat
garden,
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but
after
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government
should devote in public hand.
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To
elaborates nowadays, on earth made ample of issues for
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environment
. More-over few
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Nuo
and
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Company
work on this
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formuly
.
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"
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Tree
is life
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"
उ
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cd
as well
as
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encorudge
cell person for grow
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tree
. To epitome,
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couple of
years ago in
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australia
authorities saved grow the
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trees
.
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and
curb the nature
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disuster
.
Thus
, if in our
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contry
each person is cure the bees and rise in number of this
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reason
to human
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live
the more
comfortably
. Apart from that
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government
announce. 5 June is
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enviornment
day.

On other side, at a present, tot ample of mas masses
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leave
the rural area and shift in
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æter
urban area.
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, this
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reason
to
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inforth
coming future made the enormous
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influnce
in city like Tsunami and Other disaster. This
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reason
to our regime is con
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Prevent
this situation and encouraging for mushrooming
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enviornment
.
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, township
is grown
then direct effect on
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enviornment
as well
as,
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nowdays
,
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ein
urban areas air quality is low, they impact on human lifestyle.
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, in
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india
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delhi
air quality is
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bad
the whole world
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delhi
is the
first
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reaks
in
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polluation
.
As a result
, masses know about
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od
precious
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enviornmut
and care.
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To conclude
, according to me,
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envionment
is our priority this
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reason
to care thick
as well
as
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growther
grown too
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much
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trees
predominantly
in urban
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areus
go mushrooming
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trees
and plants.
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IELTS essay Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
5.5
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