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Some people think that individual only eat vegetarian rather than meat do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some people think that individual only eat vegetarian rather than meat 7pM8A

It is argued by certain group of masses that all Fox out to become vegetarian and it is not it is not necessary to intake non veg for become health. This essay will highlight that certainly is a return channel approach that need to be opted. To commence with there are certain reasons why only vegetarian diet is not appropriate to become a healthy the first and foremost reason is that it not help to fulfill Chevrolet nutrition in body to elaborate elaborate it no doubt vegetarian Fox eat nuts at various kind of fruit and supplements to fulfill the requirement of protein zinc iron and many essential nutrition but it was incomplete in it for the instant when a sports person do practice of their game on the time they need to lot of energy and their diet will never ignore because the persons that give them energy similarly if sport person it only vegetarian they may not fulfill the all need of essential supplement does with non veg masses is good health. Father moving father folks who are non veg can easily mix with the vegetarian in other word in some circumstances when the non veg food is a not available on the time they can eat a veg food meat also help to give strong bones and immunity system also improve does individual who only eat veg may need to take a lot of supplements and they face a problem to balance their diet therefore it is a beneficial for masses to eat meat to become healthy. To conclude to become healthy people should take the meat because it gave them all and UT nutrition because vegetarian think cannot be fulfilled to the requirement of supplements

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