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This century is better to live than 100 years ago

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This century has witnessed advancement in every walks of life. A lot of changes has occurred in last few years. I agree that this period is the best time to live since earth has born than in the past. First and foremost, Science and technology has evolved which has improved longevity to greater extent. Updated equipments in medical field has lead to fall in mortality rate. For instance, Imaging techniques are helpful to diagnose early disease. Such as, with the help of MRI neural changes can be treated early. Secondly, communication has made earth a global village due to which person can contact with anyone in a few seconds. For example, I can talk with my best friend who lives in Canada on video calling. In Addition, transportation system like bullet train, airplane has reduced time to reach from one place to another. Likewise in pas it took a plethora of time to reach somewhere. However, with these all up gradation research and studies are still ongoing on a number of field. Such as, how to transplant cells rather than organs. To prevent global warming effects government of all countries are still working on various projects. In the past people used to do a lot of mechanical work which has been replaced with machines and robotics. Furthermore, Artificial intelligence is the most ongoing field in current era. To sum up, I would like to affirm that this century is far better to live life with all the fulfillment and advancement which has led happiness and reduced human efforts.
This century has witnessed advancement in every
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of life.
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A lot of
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changes
has occurred in last few years. I
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agree
that this period is the best time to
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live
since earth has
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born
than in the past.

First
and foremost, Science and technology has evolved which has
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improved
longevity to greater extent. Updated equipments in medical field has lead to fall in mortality rate.
For instance
, Imaging techniques are helpful to diagnose early disease. Such as, with the
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help
of MRI neural
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changes
can
be treated
early.

Secondly
, communication has made earth a global village due to which person can contact with anyone in a few seconds.
For example
, I can talk with my best friend who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
in Canada on video calling.
In Addition
, transportation system like bullet train, airplane has
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reduced
time to reach from one place to another.
Likewise
in pas it took a plethora of time to reach somewhere.

However
, with these all up gradation research and studies are
still
ongoing on a number of field. Such as, how to transplant cells
rather
than organs. To
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prevent
global warming effects
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government
of all countries are
still
working on various projects. In the past
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people
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used
to do
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a lot of
mechanical work which has
been replaced
with machines and robotics.
Furthermore
, Artificial intelligence is the most ongoing field in
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current
era.

To sum up, I would like to affirm that this century is far better to
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live
life with all the fulfillment and advancement which has led happiness and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
human efforts.
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IELTS essay This century is better to live than 100 years ago

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
258 words
6.5
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