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Describe a discovery / invention you like most.

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Nowaday, the light net is covery whole over the world. So can you imagine how a bad day without light it is. So when I read about the discovery of “light bulb” made a strong impression to me. The inventor made the light bulb became popular and could be mass produced is Thomas Edison. He became famous because of his perseverance, thousands of trial and error, and thoudands of practical inventions. To made the light bulb had longer duration and lighter, he had made over ten thousand experiments. Then the light bulb have helped people get rid of the fear of the darkness and Edison became the greatest invention of the world.
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“light
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made a strong impression to me.

The inventor made the
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became popular and could be
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mass produced
is Thomas Edison. He became
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famous
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of his perseverance, thousands of trial and error, and
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thoudands
of practical inventions.
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had longer duration and lighter, he had made over ten thousand experiments. Then the
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have
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helped
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people
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rid of the fear of the darkness and Edison became the greatest invention of the world.
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IELTS essay Describe a discovery / invention you like most.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
112 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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