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fast food is the part of life in many places. some people think that this is dangerous for health do you agree or diagree.

fast food is the part of life in many places. some people think that this is dangerous for health do you agree or diagree. o6rNB
there is no deny in the fact that, unhealthy meal plays paramount role in umpteen areas. Legion individuals deem that it is harmful for health. To the best of knowledge this idea should accepted that junk food is risky. I will elaborate my view regarding this in the subsequent fragment. To commence with, there are myrid causes behind this thought but the predominating one is that youngsters prefer to eat outside food because these food is availabe easily. To cite an example, due to their hectic lifestyle, moirtals have no enough tine to cook food at home because masses go to their duties. Hense, individuals love to eat oily foods. As a result, these type of foods are not too much expensive as well as it is appear in rural and urban regions. Furthermore, there are many reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost, junkfood in injuries for health but people like to eat more because these foods are very spicy and delicious. For instance, the number of teenagers purchases online because many hotels and restaurants provide home delivery therefore mostly folks besides they get within a few minutes. So, unhealthy foods are renowned among the juveniles. consequently, people eat more beside when they go outside then mortals may eat these foods. To conclude, although, oily foods are harmful for individuals. Nevertheless, theseday individuals tend to eat outside food as compare to cheap traditional food because of cheapest abd it is get easy for everyone.
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there
is no deny in the fact that, unhealthy meal plays paramount role in umpteen areas. Legion
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individuals
deem that it is harmful for health. To the best of knowledge this
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idea
should
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accepted
that junk
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food
is risky. I will elaborate my view regarding this in the subsequent fragment. To commence with, there are
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myrid
causes behind this
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thought
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the predominating one is that youngsters prefer to
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eat
outside
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food
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because
these
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food
is
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availabe
easily
. To cite an example, due to their hectic lifestyle,
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moirtals
have no
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enough
tine to cook
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food
at home
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because
masses go to their duties.
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Hense
,
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individuals
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love
to
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eat
oily
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foods
.
As a result
, these type of
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foods
are not too much expensive
as well
as it is
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appear
in rural and urban regions.
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, there are
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reasons to substantiate it.
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and foremost,
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junkfood
in injuries for health
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people
like to
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eat
more
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because
these
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foods
are
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very
spicy and delicious.
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, the number of
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teenagers
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purchases
online
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because
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many
hotels and restaurants provide home delivery
therefore
mostly
folks
besides
they
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get
within a few minutes.
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So
, unhealthy
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foods
are renowned
among the juveniles.
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consequently
,
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people
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eat
more beside when they go outside
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then
mortals may
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eat
these
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foods
.
To conclude
, although, oily
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foods
are harmful for
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individuals
.
Nevertheless
,
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theseday
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individuals
tend to
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eat
outside
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food
as compare to
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cheap
traditional
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food
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because
of
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cheapest
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abd
it is
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get
easy for everyone.
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IELTS essay fast food is the part of life in many places. some people think that this is dangerous for health do you agree or diagree.

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