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Some people think taxes should be high while others say that they should be low. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Tax is the primary method of collecting money by governments. It is a part of our social system for hundreds of years. Residents pay a proportion of their income and goods to government for the development of society such as schools and roads. Governments usually fix the amount of tax and most of the time it is relative to the income of the taxpayer. Some people believe that taxes should be high while others want them to be low. No doubt, both sides have their own pros and cons, but in my opinion, taxes should not be too high and must be according to financial resources. High tax makes the government economically strong. Governments can collect more money for the development of public sectors. This money can be used for the advancement of healthcare, education or transit services. Moreover, authorities can save this money for later, such as in case of disasters or economic crisis. For instance, during the pandemic, COVID 19, many employees got laid off and at that time the government gave them monthly financial aid. This is only possible if a government is able to save money through higher taxes. However, this is also an extra burden on common people. High tax means that there is extra hidden costs behind every purchase. It disrupts the budget of low-income families. They cannot contribute to society until their own needs are satisfied. Low tax gives them more freedom to buy their necessities. Also, they can invest their saved money to grow their business. It makes people more independent in financial terms. For example, I want to buy a house, if there is low land transfer and property tax, I can invest more in actual price of the house instead of paying the government. Even though, the government uses this money for public welfare, without fulfillment of basic needs, individuals cannot enjoy other facilities like schools and recreation centers. In conclusion, tax money returns to its payers in the form of services if governments use it well. It should not be too high to break the financial goals of citizens, but at the same time, it should be enough to provide them appropriate services. Taxes should be deducted on the basis of economic status. It should be low for poor, so they can have some extra pennies for their needs.
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is the primary method of collecting
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money
by
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governments
. It is a part of our social system for hundreds of years. Residents pay a proportion of their income and
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goods
to
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government
for the development of society such as schools and roads.
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Governments
usually
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fix
the amount of
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tax
and most of the time it is relative to the income of the taxpayer.
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Some
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people
believe that
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taxes
should be high while others want them to be
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low
. No doubt, both sides have their
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pros and cons,
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but
in my opinion,
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taxes
should not be too high and
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must
be according to
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financial
resources.

High
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tax
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makes
the
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government
economically
strong.
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Governments
can collect more
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money
for the development of public sectors. This
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money
can be
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used
for the advancement of healthcare, education or transit services.
Moreover
, authorities can save this
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money
for later, such as in case of disasters or economic crisis.
For instance
, during the pandemic,
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COVID 19
,
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many
employees
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got
laid
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off


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and
at that time the
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government
gave them monthly
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financial
aid. This is
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only
possible if a
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government
is able to save
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through higher
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taxes
.
However
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also
an extra burden on common
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High
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tax
means that there is extra hidden costs behind every
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purchase
. It disrupts the budget of low-income families. They cannot contribute to society until their
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own
needs
are satisfied
.
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Low
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tax
gives them more freedom to
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buy
their necessities.
Also
, they can invest their saved
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money
to grow their business. It
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makes
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people
more independent in
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financial
terms.
For example
, I want to
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buy
a
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house
, if there is
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low
land transfer and property
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tax
, I can invest more in actual price of the
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house
instead
of paying the
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government
.
Even though
, the
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government
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uses
this
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money
for public welfare, without fulfillment of basic needs, individuals cannot enjoy other facilities like schools and recreation centers.

In conclusion
,
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tax
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money
returns to its payers in the form of services if
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governments
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use
it well. It should not be too high to break the
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financial
goals of citizens,
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but
at the same time, it should be
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enough
to provide them appropriate services.
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Taxes
should
be deducted
on the basis of economic status. It should be
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low
for poor,
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so
they can have
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some
extra pennies for their needs.
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IELTS essay Some people think taxes should be high while others say that they should be low.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
390 words
6.0
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