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This can make an influence on his personality but it is obvious that this kid can change that inappropriate attitude as he grew up and if he does not change it, he should be responsible for what he doing because he could choose how to attitude.

This can make an influence on his personality but it is obvious that this kid can change that inappropriate attitude as he grew up and if he does not change it, he should be responsible for what he doing because he could choose how to attitude. As a child growing up, It will gain variety of experiences and would be able to recognize an appropriate attitude from an inappropriate one. There are lots of people people who got some cruel parents who not pay attention to their children's education but these children find the ways themselves and become famous ob different branches of science. In conclusion, I believe hard-working is the most important aspect of each person's life. furthermore, experiences which gaining and the decisions made during life are coming on the next step. But, aspects which we can not choose are less important and can be changed during life.

This can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 an influence on his personality This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is obvious that this kid can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 that inappropriate attitude as he grew up and if he does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 it, he should be responsible for what Did you mean "he's doing", "he is doing", or "he was doing"?he's doinghe is doinghe was doing
he doing
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because
 he could choose how to attitude.

As a child growing up, It will gain variety of experiences and would be able to recognize an appropriate attitude from an inappropriate one. There are lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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people
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 cruel parents who not pay attention to their children's education This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 these children find the ways themselves and become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 ob This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 branches of science.

In conclusion
, I believe This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-working is the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 aspect of each person's life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
furthermore
, experiences which gaining and the decisions made during life are coming on the next
 step. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, aspects which we can not choose are less This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 and can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 during life. 