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riset problem in indonesia

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In this proposed research, I shall employ historical research methods. The method of historical research is a set of rules and systematic principles for collecting historical sources effectively, evaluating them critically and proposing the synthesis of results in written form. Data collection and analysis techniques used in this study are to follow the procedures in the historical research method, that consist of 1) Collection of Resources (Heuristics); 2) Source Criticism; 3) Interpretation; and 3) Presentation (historiography). The data will be collected through archives and literature/bibliographical research as well as interviews with some historical figures.
In this proposed
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, I shall employ
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methods. The method of
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historical
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is a set of
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rules
and systematic principles for collecting
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historical
sources
effectively
, evaluating them
critically
and proposing the synthesis of results in written form.

Data collection and analysis techniques
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used
in this study are to follow the procedures in the
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historical
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research
method, that consist of 1) Collection of Resources (Heuristics); 2) Source Criticism; 3) Interpretation; and 3) Presentation (historiography).

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be collected
through archives and literature/bibliographical
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as well
as interviews with
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figures.
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IELTS essay riset problem in indonesia

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
94 words
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