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Think of something that happened to you or to another person. Write an onlin posting of 160-180 words.

Think of something that happened to you or to another person. Write an onlin posting of 160-180 words. mXrnd

Now, I feel very sad and disappointed in myself. Last weekend, my parents and I had a conflict because my parents and I disagreed about the use of phones. My parents tried to advise me to stay calm and listen to their suggestions for me, but because I was so angry, I refused to listen and had a bad attitude towards them. And then after a while of calm, looking back on the problem, yesterday I finally accepted that I spent too much time on my phone that I forgot about my family. I immediately sat down with my parents and apologized. At this time, my parents were very happy and accepted my apology along with compliments because I realized my mistake. I also saw it myself. I'm happy because I know how to admit my mistakes, become more mature and most importantly don't make my parents sad anymore

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so
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bad
 attitude towards them. And then after a while of calm, looking back on the problem, yesterday I finally
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accepted
 that I spent too much time on my phone that I forgot about my family. I immediately sat down with my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 and apologized. At this time, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
 my apology along with compliments This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I realized my mistake. I also
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saw
 it myself. I'm happy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I know how to admit my mistakes, become more mature and most importantly
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