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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of raising pets

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of raising pets 7087b
For a long time, pets have been considered to be humans’ good friends and this is even more evident in this day and age with an increasing number of households adopting domestic animals. However, everything has two sides and pet ownership is not an exception. While raising pets brings many benefits, there still exist certain drawbacks that cannot be ignored. There are numerous indisputable advantages of nurturing pets. First and foremost, pets such as dogs have the ability to protect owners and even property from dangers. With inherent nature and through training, some kinds of them not only guard the house against external threats but also have reflexes to strike back those who deliberately endanger their owners. Besides, pets are also the faithful companions of humans that bring us a happier life. In cases we have anxiety, stress, or depression, playing with them helps us keep those spiritual and psychological problems away. Nevertheless, owning pets has a few disadvantages as well, such as potential health risks and high cost of care. In many circumstances, pets cannot control their actions and become aggressive so that they can attack people and sometimes their owners. Moreover, they are often the source of many diseases since they carry many pathogens which can be easily transmitted to humans. Another unexpected aspect is that the cost of raising pets accounts for a significant part of our budget. There appear various things an owner has to pay in order to meet from fundamental demands to other needs namely health or beauty, etc. In conclusion, despite various merits of keeping pets, people should think over the downsides of it so as to protect ourselves from dangers and optimize their benefits. Only with proactive actions of humans, pets will increasingly become not only a protector but also a reliable friend of people.
For a long time,
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pets
have
been considered
to be
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humans’
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good
friends and this is even more evident in this day and age with an increasing number of households adopting domestic animals.
However
, everything has two sides and pet ownership is not an exception. While raising
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pets
brings
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many
benefits, there
still
exist certain drawbacks that cannot be
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ignored
.

There are numerous indisputable advantages of nurturing
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pets
.
First
and foremost,
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pets
such as dogs have the ability to protect
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owners
and even property from
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dangers
. With inherent nature and through training,
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some
kinds of them not
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only
guard the
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house
against external threats
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but
also
have reflexes to strike back those who
deliberately
endanger their
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owners
.
Besides
,
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pets
are
also
the faithful companions of
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humans
that bring us a happier life. In
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cases we
have anxiety,
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stress
, or depression, playing with them
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helps
us
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keep
those spiritual and psychological problems away.

Nevertheless
, owning
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pets
has a few disadvantages
as well
, such as potential health
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risks
and high cost of care. In
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many
circumstances,
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pets
cannot control their actions and become aggressive
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so
that they can attack
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people
and
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sometimes
their
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owners
.
Moreover
, they are
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often
the source of
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many
diseases since they carry
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many
pathogens which can be
easily
transmitted to
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humans
. Another unexpected aspect is that the cost of raising
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pets
accounts for a significant part of our budget. There appear various things an
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owner
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has to
pay in order to
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meet
from fundamental demands to other needs
namely
health or beauty, etc.

In conclusion
, despite various merits of keeping
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pets
,
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people
should
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think
over the downsides of it
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so as to
protect ourselves from
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dangers
and optimize their benefits.
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Only
with proactive actions of
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humans
,
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pets
will
increasingly
become not
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only
a protector
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but
also
a reliable friend of
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people
.
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IELTS essay Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of raising pets

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