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Some people say that University students should use their own money to pay for their studies because its benefit individuals rather than the whole society are the says that the government should have with tuition fees discuss your opinion with reasons and examples

Some people say that University students should use their own money to pay for their studies because its benefit individuals rather than the whole society are the says that the government should have with tuition fees discuss your opinion with reasons and examples L3RY8
Although education cannot be explain in the world but these days acquiring knowledge is not an easy task because the fees of universities rapidly on increasing moreover some individuals believe that students should make payment for education by their own in contrast something that authorities should have learner regarding this financial issue to begin with there are a lot of benefits if students get earn from a job in student life it helps to maintain them a balance between walking and social life as well as they not only make a time management but also learn how to busting money we can know the value of money they would not become a stand trip person and also save lot of money for future additionally they become independent person they can not only pay their tuition fees but also help their parents financially such as as they can help their Guardians to pay some household expenses which make feeling proud in spite of these numerous benefits some believes that the lawmakers should also help students because in the society all the students are not able to work for example those students who are handicapped there are some specific arrangement should be regularised for them and also make some concessions in their fees as per my perspective students should earn by themselves because it's not only have them in future and how to make them financially strong last but not the least government should have help only those students who are not able to work physically to summarising up teenager make some earning which also change all their thinking to work wastage of money why government make some concession for specific students
Although education cannot be
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explain
in the world
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but
these days acquiring knowledge is not an easy task
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because
the fees of universities
rapidly
on increasing
moreover
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some
individuals believe that
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students
should
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make
payment for education by their
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own
in contrast
something that authorities should have learner regarding this financial issue to
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begin
with there are
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a lot of
benefits if
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students
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get
earn from a job in
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student
life it
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helps
to maintain them a balance between walking and social life
as well
as they not
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only
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make
a time management
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but
also
learn how to busting
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money
we can know the value of
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money
they would not become a stand trip person and
also
save
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lot of
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money
for future
additionally
they become independent person they can not
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only
pay their tuition fees
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but
also
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help
their parents
financially
such
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as as
they can
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help
their Guardians to pay
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some
household expenses which
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make
feeling proud
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in spite of
these numerous benefits
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some
believes that the lawmakers should
also
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help
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students
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because
in the society all the
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students
are not able to work
for example
those
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students
who
are handicapped
there are
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some
specific arrangement should be
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regularised
for them and
also
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make
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some
concessions in their fees as per my perspective
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students
should earn by themselves
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because
it's not
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only
have them in future and how to
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make
them
financially
strong last
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but
not the least
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government
should have
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help
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only
those
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students
who are not able to work
physically
to
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summarising
up
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teenager
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make
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some
earning which
also
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change
all their thinking to work wastage of
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money
why
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government
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make
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some
concession for specific
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students
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IELTS essay Some people say that University students should use their own money to pay for their studies because its benefit individuals rather than the whole society are the says that the government should have with tuition fees discuss your opinion with reasons and examples

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
279 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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