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Think about where you want to be 10 years from now. Now write it down. Where do you want to be 1 years from now? Dream big! No thoughts or goal is too ambitious.

Think about where you want to be 10 years from now. Now write it down. Where do you want to be 1 years from now? Dream big! No thoughts or goal is too ambitious. KwVX6
First, I want to be debt-free 1 years from now. Every penny I earn should be plus in my balance. Then, I believe, I would be less stressed, I can think more clearly and make better decisions. Of course, again, after that, we can search for a place to live in other than Turkey. We can consider buying a house, a car, and having another child. We can focus on the works we want to do. We won't have to jump from project to project just to earn money. We can consider having a holiday, seeing the world etc. 10 years from now? I can't think much about that distance, but I can say my plans would be mostly about my family. My kids' education, my parents' retirement, my sister's job and personal life, having a house and car without debt, saving a certain amount of money. . . I don't know, when I write like that, the first paragraph seemed possible even without finishing the debts. And second paragraph seemed easy to achieve. It's not so ambitious, it seems like a government officer's ideal. Funny. . . I want to start global projects as soon as possible. I want to sell multi-language books and courses. I want to sell one of my projects. I want to produce a documentary about language learning and publish it on Netflix. While doing or planning these, I'm sure I'll have other opinions and life will drift me from places to places. But I'm sure I want to have a life simples, at least in terms of mind.
First
, I
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to be debt-free 1 years from
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. Every penny I earn should be plus in my balance. Then, I believe, I would be less
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stressed
, I can
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think
more
clearly
and
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make
better decisions.
Of course
, again, after that, we can search for a place to
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live
in other than Turkey. We can consider buying a
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house
, a car, and having another child. We can focus on the works we
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want
to do.
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We
won't
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have to
jump from
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project
to
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project
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just
to earn money.
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We
can consider having a holiday, seeing the world etc.

10 years from
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now
? I can't
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think
much about that distance,
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but
I can say my plans would be
mostly
about my family. My kids' education, my parents' retirement, my sister's job and personal life, having a
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house
and car without debt, saving a certain amount of money.
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I don't know, when I write like that, the
first
paragraph seemed possible even without finishing the debts. And second paragraph seemed easy to achieve. It's not
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so
ambitious, it seems like a
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government
officer's ideal.
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Funny
.
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I
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want
to
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start
global
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projects
as
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soon
as possible. I
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want
to sell multi-language books and courses.
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I
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want
to sell one of my
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projects
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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want
to produce a documentary about language learning and publish it on Netflix. While doing or planning these, I'm sure I'll have other opinions and life will drift me from places to places.
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But
I'm sure I
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want
to have a life
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simples
, at least in terms of mind.
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IELTS essay Think about where you want to be 10 years from now. Now write it down. Where do you want to be 1 years from now? Dream big! No thoughts or goal is too ambitious.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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