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Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation.

Nowadays, there are various pastime options for kids, they can entertain themselves with sophisticated games. Items like puzzles, board games and pictures undoubtedly holds a significant contribution to the child's growth. I strongly believe that these items are the inevitable factor for the kid's development who ranges between anyone from the time of birth to until the age of teenager. Firstly, Puzzles as it sounds like a riddle is a most easy to do task but only once you become used to it. Children should be encouraged to play puzzle games because, they will see a lot of different pieces of the puzzle scattered on table, they would send signals to brain to recognize and identify the objects they know and separate them from different objects. After this, kids brain and hands work in tandem, which actually helps them to find the right piece and fit it into the puzzle accurately. For example, it has been observed that children who were exposed to puzzles first time were filled with anxiety and fear and looks astonished as compared to the others who play it on a regular basis. Second, important item is board-games which are very common and quite popular among kids but not all forms of it. The children should try to play most of the varieties of the board game because it helps especially the young kids to recollect the numbers of dice, they can easily locate the safe and unsafe spots on board games and on top of that they are aware of some dangers like a snake bite in board games. Thirdly, pictures often help the children to store the images in the mind so that they can be recollected at the time when shown to them either to identify the name of the people or the place they went to. To conclude, the items like puzzles, board games and pictures, all three of them are vital in the overall child development, and if ignored, it can bring detrimental effects to the children overall growth and development
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games
and pictures
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items
are the inevitable factor for the kid's development who ranges between anyone from the time of birth to until the age of
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be encouraged
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games
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scattered on table, they would
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signals to brain to recognize and identify the objects they know and separate them from
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brain and hands work in tandem, which actually
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common and quite popular among
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not all forms of it. The
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children
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because
it
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to recollect the numbers of dice, they can
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locate the safe and unsafe spots on
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board
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, pictures
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help
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children
to store the images in the mind
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so
that they can
be recollected
at the time when shown to them either to identify the name of the
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people
or the place they went to.

To conclude
, the
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items
like
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puzzles
,
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board
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games
and pictures, all three of them are vital in the
overall
child development, and if
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ignored
, it can bring detrimental effects to the
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children
overall
growth and development
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IELTS essay Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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