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Thing I dislike doing in my free time

Thing I dislike doing in my free time BWMjm
I like doing some things but I diskike doing other things. When I was young, I disliked getting up early, doing homework, and doing housework. Now, I do not mind doing those things, but there are some other things that I do not like yet. I dislike doing another thing while I am busy doing something. I mean I do not want to be interrupted while I am doing something. For example, while I am ironing the clothes someone knocks at the door or rings the doorbell. I do not want to answer the door bell or go to the front door to open it. Unluckily my eldest sister usually tells me to do so. I feel upset but I dare not explain to her because she is senior to me. Sometimes while we are having dinner, the phone rings. It is my duty to pick up the phone because I am the youngest in my family. If the caller hangs up after exchanging a few words with me, it is all right. On the contrary, most of the callers at the dinner time are usually long-winded. I feel upset and often cut them short. The most disappointing thing is being interrupted while studying my lessons though it rarely happens. Another thing I dislike to do is washing the dishes. It may seem strange. I do other kinds of housework such as the washing, the shopping, the cooking, the cleaning and the ironing but I do not want to do the washing-up. My mother knows about it so she spares me the trouble of washing the dishes. She is a loving and understanding mother. Another thing I dislike doing may be even stranger. I do not want to go to wedding receptions. I think it is stressful to wear formal dresses and jewellery, to greet and smile at everybody I meet and to be careful about what ever I do. I am lucky because my elder sisters are keen on going to such occasions. The things that I dislike doing may be different from those of others, and may seem odd. However, I cannot always avoil doing those things because I have to live in a family and in a society. It is natural that there are some things we like doing and also other things we dislike doing.
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diskike
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things. When I was young, I disliked getting up early,
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doing
homework, and
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doing
housework.
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those things,
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there are
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some
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things that I do not like
yet
. I
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doing
another thing while I am busy
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doing
something. I mean I do not
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want
to
be interrupted
while I am
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doing
something.
For example
, while I am ironing the clothes someone knocks at the door or rings the doorbell. I do not
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want
to answer the
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door bell
or go to the front door to open it.
Unluckily
my eldest sister
usually
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tells
me to do
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. I feel upset
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I dare not
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to her
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because
she is senior to me.
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Sometimes
while we are having dinner, the phone rings. It is my duty to pick up the phone
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because
I am the youngest in my family. If the caller hangs up after exchanging a few words with me, it is all right.
On the contrary
, most of the callers at the dinner time are
usually
long-winded. I feel upset and
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often
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cut
them short. The most disappointing thing is
being interrupted
while studying my lessons though it rarely happens. Another thing I
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dislike to do
is washing the dishes. It may seem strange. I do
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other
kinds of housework such as the washing, the shopping, the cooking, the cleaning and the ironing
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but
I do not
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want
to do the washing-up. My mother knows about it
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so
she spares me the trouble of washing the dishes. She is a loving and understanding mother. Another thing I
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dislike
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doing
may be even stranger. I do not
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want
to go to wedding receptions. I
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think
it is stressful to wear formal dresses and
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jewellery
, to greet and smile at everybody I
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meet
and to be careful about what ever I do.
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I
am lucky
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my elder sisters are keen on going to such occasions. The things that I
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doing
may be
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different
from those of others, and may seem odd.
However
, I cannot always
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avoil
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doing
those things
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I
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have to
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live
in a family and in a society. It is natural that there are
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some
things we like
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doing
and
also
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other
things we
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dislike
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doing
.
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IELTS essay Thing I dislike doing in my free time

Essay
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389 words
5.5
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