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Technology is the increasing day by day but some people are saying that it is not good for relationship are you agree this think?

Technology is the increasing day by day but some people are saying that it is not good for relationship are you agree this think? 0B6PB

Literally taking this topic into high concentration it's well fortified fact that holds the attention of internet is increasing day by day an essential role in our life in the past internet has been increased but presently internet has made important there are a rich profusion of merits and dimerits I would explain my further points in the forthcoming paragraphTo begin with there are a lot of benifits of internet internet is a part of the world people are excessively depends on the internet now we can video call with friends and relatives whenever it was not impossible in the past from internet use, we can see the news on mobile I read the books, we can know about the history and we can do any work from internet. On the contrary some people argue for that internet is not good for relationship they have different binds of views that has vehemently I strongly disagree this perspectiveness Overall it is with dogged determination

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 taking this topic into high concentration it's well fortified fact that holds the attention of internet is increasing day by day an essential role in our life in the past internet has been increased
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but
presently
 internet has made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
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dimerits
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explain
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paragraphTo
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begin
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a lot of
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benifits
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internet internet
 is a part of the world This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are excessively
 depends on the internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 we can video call with friends and relatives whenever it was not impossible in the past from internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
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history and
 we can do any work from internet. On the contrary
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some
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people
 argue for that internet is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for relationship they have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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perspectiveness
Overall
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