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They gave me your preference to inke liye the education of plays vital role in order

They gave me your preference to inke liye the education of plays vital role in order PWDRd
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IELTS essay They gave me your preference to inke liye the education of plays vital role in order

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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