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They are many people who are working from home today and making the use of latest technology some people often assume that it is only the water should take benefit from the situation and not the employees to what extent do you agree or disagree

They are many people who are working from home today and making the use of latest technology some people often assume that it is only the water should take benefit from the situation and not the employees lxd89
In past era all the offices works schools and colleges like everything was closed because of covid-19 hope technology started from that time and not is work from home is one of the best and popular option is created for doing jobs I am strongly agree for work from home technology the next paragraph I am discussing about how to work from home becoming very useful in all over the world to embark with working from home is playing important role nowadays all companies have started work from home jobs for everyone those who did not have any job that people also doing work from home jobs other work from home saves time but it also saves money for example sometimes we suddenly get date from work because of traffic other works and so on in work from home there is no issue of late starting job or there is not a issue of wasting time in spite of work from home saves time and saves money like charges of fuel clothes etc. In the other side white from home is very beneficial for workers who are doing jobs and employees most beneficial things for employees that they select people for job from anywhere and anytime agglomerating all the points it can be concluded that work from home job is more beneficial work from office my point of view is it is a wastage of time rather than work from home it also saves money as well
In past era all the offices works schools and colleges like everything
was closed
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because
of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
hope technology
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started
from that
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time
and not is
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work
from home is one of the best and popular option
is created
for doing
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jobs
I am
strongly
Consider using a past participle here: "agreed".
agree
for
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work
from home technology the
next
paragraph I am
Did you mean simply "discussing how"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discussing about how
to
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work
from home becoming
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very
useful in all over the world to embark with working from home is playing
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important
role nowadays all
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companies
have
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started
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work
from home
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jobs
for everyone those who did not have any
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job
that
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people
also
doing
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work
from home
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jobs
other
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work
from home
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saves
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time
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but
it
also
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saves
money
for example
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sometimes
we
suddenly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
date from
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work
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because
of traffic other works and
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so
on in
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work
from home there is no issue of late starting
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job
or there is not
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
issue of wasting
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time
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in spite of
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work
from home
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saves
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time
and
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saves
money like charges of fuel clothes etc.

In the other side white from home is
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very
beneficial for workers who are doing
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jobs
and employees most beneficial things for employees that they select
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people
for
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job
from anywhere and anytime agglomerating all the points it can
be concluded
that
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work
from home
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
is more beneficial
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work
from office my point of view is it is a wastage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
rather
than
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work
from home it
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
saves
money
as well

IELTS essay They are many people who are working from home today and making the use of latest technology some people often assume that it is only the water should take benefit from the situation and not the employees

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
246 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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