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These visuals illustrate how house designs differ regarding climate patterns.

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These visuals illustrate how house designs differ regarding climate patterns. The most apparent distinction between houses poses in the shape of the roof. The designs are also different with regard to the windows and the use of insulation. One of the main things to note is that the cool climate house possesses a roof which points upward so that sunlight gets in through the window. Conversely, the roof of the warm climate house owns a peak in the middle and roof overhangs to create shadow for the windows. Insulation and thermal construction materials are applied in cool climates to prevent heat loss. On the other hand, insulation and reflective materials are used to keep the heat out in warm climates. What's more, the cool climate house has one window which faces the direction of the sun rays. Yet, the warm climate house windows are shaded from the sun on two sides. Ventilation can be provided by opening them at night. (159)
These visuals illustrate how
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house
designs differ regarding
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climate
patterns. The most apparent distinction between
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houses
poses in the shape of the
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roof
. The designs are
also
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different
with regard to the windows and the
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use
of insulation.

One of the main things to note is that the cool
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climate
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house
possesses a
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roof
which points upward
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so
that sunlight
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gets
in through the window.
Conversely
, the
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roof
of the warm
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climate
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house
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owns
a peak in the middle and
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roof
overhangs to create shadow for the windows. Insulation and thermal construction materials
are applied
in cool
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climates
to
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prevent
heat loss.
On the other hand
, insulation and reflective materials are
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used
to
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keep
the heat out in warm climates.

What's more, the cool
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climate
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house
has one window which faces the direction of the sun rays.
Yet
, the warm
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climate
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house
windows
are shaded
from the sun on two sides. Ventilation can
be provided
by opening them at night. (159)
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IELTS essay These visuals illustrate how house designs differ regarding climate patterns.

Essay
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160 words
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